Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h

What about nonwizards that are still half animal?

I haven’t put to much thought into this. But they are half-animal because of a curse so…

I’ll leave it up to the reader for now.

@theducktator

Nooooooo! I knew Charles was doomed.😭 I don’t think Alan will go back to magic again. I find it more likely he attempts to free Charles again, but Charles still dies somehow.

When I saw you asking for more, my thoughts were She’s onto me. But this is the way Charles’ story goes.

So what do you think Alan should do?

@ellette-giselle

Other then that……I don’t know if I want to say it was good because this is so bad. Poor Alan. But it was a……. hmmm……. a well done chapter.

Thank you!

He just asked for forgiveness, not mercy. They often go hand in hand, but they are not the same. To forgive doesn’t mean you take away the punishment.

Good point.
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@ellette-giselle

Only Beric remained cold toward them. No, it wasn’t really coldness, Joseph decided. It was more of a hesitance and perhaps fear. He reminded Joseph of a wounded animal. He often sat in the corner and watched the children from a distance. He flashed angrily if any reference was made to his injured leg, and he only spoke when n…

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@stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Messed up the last link. The correct one is in my previous post on here.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, sorry, I got confused and messed the link up.

Here is the correct one:

Chapter the 32nd – The Cost

@highscribeofaetherium

I know you haven’t been following it, but I hope you don’t mind if I just use all my snowballs for my current WIP. I just found out I have to work a lot through the holidays, so I want to focus on TNPT: The Cost – Draft 2 so I can achieve my goal of completing it before the year ends.

@theducktator

There, just did a chapter with 2,458 words.

I don’t feel like throwing any snowballs at the moment, so I’m going to build a fort with the 16 snowballs I earned from that.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Here we go. Are you ready?

Chapter the 30th – The Cost

I think you can tell what direction I’m going with this, but I want to hear your thoughts before we see what Alan does. What do you think Alan should do and why?

@the_lost-journal

Enjoy your semi-break!

@theducktator

What do you request? Random writing on here for the island story I’ve been making up on the spot, or more TNPT?

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, but all I could think about was the last couple of scenes while I was making it. I guess that kinda affected the way it came across. 

I kind of woundered that.

Yeah, that’s better! Now I can see a picture that was blocked before. The man with his arms in the air. I think that cries redemption louder than the red text.

@ellette-giselle

I think this is different. He’s not afraid of himself failing at this time, and he’s not afraid of people. He’s stressed out that his wife might get sick with an incurable plague. I feel like it’s different. *shrug* maybe not.

Ah, okay. Maks sence.

You wouldn’t have without seeing the board! lolol

Guess so.

Did I say Beric was…

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@ellette-giselle

Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?

It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or break free from the darkness. Not a big fan of the font. But this does fit the tone…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

I didn’t even realize what was wrong in your meme, Ellette, until Rax posted his.

Gandalf not seem to like jokes much.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)

Yes, but it was more of the expression than the hair.

Eric whooped.

I see Eric’s taken up a new hobby, teasing everyone for any signs of love. He better watch his back if he gets a girlfriend.

Joseph drew in a shuddering breath. “I’m so afraid for you…

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@stephie

Forgot to return here.

The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.

Now I have 20. What to do with them?

Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
@theshadow

@ellette-giselle

The first one you used on the David one looks like a good image if someone was to create a board for my character Alan. It’s a somewhat troubled, somewhat determined look. (Steals for future drawing reference).

From those boards, David brings Frodo Baggins to mind whereas Stephen’s makes me think of Pippen Took.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter. 30 chapters now. Wow.

Chapter the 30th – The Regretful

Also, of those of you who found spell images disturbing, there will be no more descriptions of them for the remained of this book. So you can continue reading without have to worry about that.

@ellette-giselle

Covid 19 was not the plague.

more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.

Oh, right.

Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:

Watch out,  Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!