Linus Smallprint

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I didn’t realize you had replied to this before I logged off yesterday. Thank you for your thoughts as well. I was talking to my dad about the issue and he had similar thoughts.

@stephie

On the other hand, it’s magic. It’s directly contradictory to everything Christians stand for. The Fall of man happened because humans didn’…

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@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, why is that? Was it just because that seemed logical, or because you thought I was above killing a girl, (I’ll have you know I’m not. lololololol) or because Amelia brought up wanting a child in her letter to Sabina? If I struck that part of the letter, would you have been caught off guard?

I think it was a combination fo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie

One question I forgot in my feedback file under Worldbuilding:

Any topics you recommend I research to improve worldbuilding and make it more realistic?

Also, I somehow completely forgot to add Stripe to my list of characters I’m most eager for feedback on.

@ellette-giselle

I love how you took the screenshot and turned it into your own style!

Thank you again. I would like to do this with the illustrations in the Narnia books someday.

@whalekeeper

you are definitely the best artist for the job.

Thank you again! My drawing skills are a gift from God, and while I have had to practice lot to get to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So, yeah. There’s my thoughts. I’m probably alone on this stance, but this is what I believe.

Well thank you for sharing them. I’m very glad you did. Sometimes I get the feeling that some of my readers think something I write is overly weird/wrong, but don’t tell me because ‘it’s just his thing’ or ‘you do you’. There was som…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

WOW!!! I think that’s the best thing you have ever drawn that you’ve posted on here! WOW!!!

Thank you! It really helped that I didn’t have to come up with the pose myself.

Here is the screenshot I used as a reference:

@whalekeeper

AAH it’s Zuko!! I love Zuko so much. Well done; you translated the anime-like style of the show…

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I’ve been trying to draw my characters recently, but have been struggling to do so, with something feeling wrong to the point where I cannot even finish an outline before I erase the whole thing. I’ve realized I’ve let the need to make a drawing perfect become too important to me and got stuck comparing my art to some proficient artists. There is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Still working my way through your last sections. I am at the part where they just finished finding a verse for each letter in the alphabet. (That was kind of a fun game. You had me go and check the ESV for verses that start with ‘X’)

When Amelia started feeling unwell, I kind of suspected she might be pregnant.

It’s always the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie

I’ll leave Shadow and Loopy out of this since I haven’t heard from them on here for quite a while.

I am now ready to talk about my magic system. Why is it the way it is? Well to understand that, we need to start talking about book two. I am going to have to spoil it a bit, but you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

Dunno. He way too chubby to be me though.

My signature quote is a modified quote from Andrew Peterson. The full version is the following:

Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to show how beautiful is the prick…

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@whalekeeper

Nice memes!

My favourite is the Dipper/Alan one about the Aphid repellant.

@ellette-giselle

Thank you very much for the feedback! I will get to reading through it later.

@whalekeeper

I think she’s really fun, but I’ll talk about it in the long feedback post. 😊

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

The soup began to hiss, so A…

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@ellette-giselle

We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.

Expect big sections in the time to come.

However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who do make comments will have bigger sections to comment on. If that’s too dif…

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@theducktator

Happy Belated Birthday! 🎂🎊🎈

I’d give you cake, but that would be a lie, and then I’d end up being sued by GLaDOS, and that is a fight I can’t win, so sorry. I hope you had a good birthday though!

Also, question, do you read the discussion questions in the backs of books normally? I always ignore them.😅

I sometimes read them out of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Now THAT might have just been your best chapter ever. I could feel Alan, I could sense that he was completely trust the Saviour, yet there was also pain with it, but his grief was quiet by now. If you could make the grief in the chapter before this more forceful then it would beautiful contrast to the calm in this one.

Thank you!…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m a third of the way through and I already have a lot of thoughts, so that’s good! I really like Tyn, by the way, favorite character.

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting cha…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow

I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]