Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?

It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or break free from the darkness. Not a big fan of the font. But this does fit the tone…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

I didn’t even realize what was wrong in your meme, Ellette, until Rax posted his.

Gandalf not seem to like jokes much.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)

Yes, but it was more of the expression than the hair.

Eric whooped.

I see Eric’s taken up a new hobby, teasing everyone for any signs of love. He better watch his back if he gets a girlfriend.

Joseph drew in a shuddering breath. “I’m so afraid for you…

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@stephie

Forgot to return here.

The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.

Now I have 20. What to do with them?

Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
@theshadow

@ellette-giselle

The first one you used on the David one looks like a good image if someone was to create a board for my character Alan. It’s a somewhat troubled, somewhat determined look. (Steals for future drawing reference).

From those boards, David brings Frodo Baggins to mind whereas Stephen’s makes me think of Pippen Took.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter. 30 chapters now. Wow.

Chapter the 30th – The Regretful

Also, of those of you who found spell images disturbing, there will be no more descriptions of them for the remained of this book. So you can continue reading without have to worry about that.

@ellette-giselle

Covid 19 was not the plague.

more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.

Oh, right.

Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:

Watch out,  Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!

@stephie

Okay. I’ll be working on that right away. I did get called into work unexpectedly today, so it will take longer than I was hoping, but I hopefully will post the next chapter soon.

@ellette-giselle

“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.

Out of curiousity, is this a Bible study or a church service?

Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?

William looked up and something flickered through his eyes. “I did you k…

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@stephie

I also really want another chapter from Linus.

Of TNPT or the boy stranded on the island story I’ve been putting on this forum?

@ellette-giselle

How did you get Mark Rober on your side?

@theducktator

Please don’t burn me at the stake, but fruitcake is AMAZING  and an essential part of Christmas.

When someone comes into the bulk food store and buys the glased fruit to make a fruit cake after I just cleaned the scoops.

Me:

I can’t wait for this part of Christmas to be over…

@theshadow

Yes, I do celebrate Christmas. My dad loves the season and has a playlist with over 1000 tracks on an old iPod that is played throughout December every year. We build jigsaw puzzles (many of them). Christmas Eve is when we open gifts as a family, and on Christmas day we head out to my grandparent’s church.

Our church throws a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post. 

Sorry, a large final assignment pounced out of nowhere on me and I spent the last couple of days working on it and another final assignment. I also had to work for the last two days. But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!

I…

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@theducktator

My characters are separated into groups/by themselves at the moment, but they are going to meet up at some point in the not so distant future. I think there are two together, and the other four are alone somewhere, but two of them will meet up shortly.

That could work then.

I might write that question on a sticky note and stick it to…

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@ellette-giselle

At long last, Joseph introduced them to David, who shook hands all over again. Then, they hurried to the sitting room. The whole family was quickly introduced, and the hugging and handshaking began all over again. At last, Joseph reached out and took Amelia’s hand, leading her up to his family.

Everyone met everyone, y…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.

Gochya.

haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Clear Play. 

Ah. Yeah, that’s useful.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.

Ah…

I know poor Joseph!!! I’m really glad he went and talked to Mr. Caddick about it instead of just spending a good chunk of the book w…

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@keilah-h

What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Makes sence.

Also the Tyn-Oliver fight was a little confusing to me after Alan’s muddled spell mind, so I…

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@ellette-giselle

You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind. 

Okay. I might have to rework things then, but that’s okay. I’ve talked to my sister, who knows more of my plans for book 2 about this, and she does agree that th…[Read more]