@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.
Do I really gotta remind the reader?Yes, because some of us are too stoopid to remember. Also, I thought some of them might have gone separate ways, which can often happen in…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 21 out! Not too happy with this one. I’ve discovered I don’t like to write fight scenes.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Sorry I’m late. I spent a long time yesterday finishing up a final assignment. But I’m done school for at least a year now!
It was a bittersweet parting the next day, and Leon and Julian found it more difficult to leave Landstraten now than when they had left on their way to the capital.
Who all is with them right now? You have…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Why do you ask?
Okay. You’re view on end times could impact where this story goes. For example, some Christian believe that over time, the world will get better and we ought to get involved with politics and things like that to make a Christendom. Others might believe it would be nice if our government became Christian, but don’t…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Not really. I’ve been trying to learn, but it hasn’t been my priority.
One website that might be helpful is this one: https://monikazagrobelna.com/
This lady is an insane digital artist, so don’t expect to be as good as her or you will only get discouraged. (Unless you are actually able to pull it off. That would be amazing!) But…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Ugh. Kingdom Pen decided not to tag me, but I checked anyway because I remembered you saying yesterday that you would have something to post today. And good thing I did! I will have to remember to check myself if I don’t get a notification email.
Anyway… Book!
Not only have we lost two dear friends in Marius and Prince…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Any ideas/thoughts/predictions?!
Not at the moment, though hybridlore made some interesting observations with the mask
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
First off, I love that Linus is like,”wait a month to start the next book.”
I finally convince him that I should start it sooner…….
1 month later……….
It happens.
Anyone who cringed at the writing of the last three books, (a.k.a. me) prepare to cringe more. 😭
Looking back on my own work is one of the cringiest things I have…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 20 out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Anyone want to take a survey for an essay I'm writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I did the survey. My answers will probably be under my real name: Justin.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 19 out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle
Yes, I did get those comments. Thank you! I’ve been a little busy lately finishing up final assigments, so I wasn’t able to get to replying to them until now. -
Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 18 out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 17 out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.
No worries. It’s not your fault if Kingdom Pen decided not to notify you.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Haha, says the guy talking to the lady with 16!
Nice! I only have had 9 in total.
Thanks, I got it.
Your welcome! Thank you for volunteering to read it!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I like it so far. I’m not super immersed in the world yet, but that’s cause I have no idea what the world is, and whether these characters are human or something else.
The only intelligent species in this world is humans. My sister wouldn’t write a book with any other intelligent species in.
A short section like the one at the beg…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Okay, I added you. Check your email, it may have went to your spam. It will be from my hotmail account (I have way too many email addresses)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 16 out. I put it both on Proton and Google
The second part of this chapter was probably one of the hardest to write so far. I felt just as awkward writing this as Alan felt in it. I think the book needs a scene like this though at this point, so I pressed. I’ll see what you all think.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
I got around to asking my sister for what type of feedback so is looking for. And yeah, she just wants your thoughts on the story in general for now.
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