Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

By the way, you keep on interrogating me about Leon. So I want to interrogate you on Eric. What do you think about him now? Where do you think things are going to go for him?

@ellette-giselle

I guess it would not be beyond Tyn to try to break off from the other soldiers and see if she can contribute more. I’ll see what I can do with that. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.

Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..

Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.

well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…

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@ellette-giselle

Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/n8oETFK

@ellette-giselle

Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)

(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…

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@the_lost-journal

Yup. That fits. I think I deserved that.

@ellette-giselle

If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.

Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)

Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Its, its… BEAUTIFUL!!! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying TEARS of JOY!

Thank you.

Is the magic potato going to answer my poorly poetic question, or am I going to just have to trust it has good intentions?

@ellette-giselle

There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…

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@ellette-giselle

Forgot your tag on the previous post

“I don’t know. He finally got to a point where he stopped threatening to kill us every other minute. But from then on, he just listened silently. When he left, he made no indication that he was ever coming back. all I know is something changed his mind in respect to killing us. Beyond that…” Noah shrugged again.

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@the_lost-journal

You grandness has inspired me to write some possible bad poetry.

*Ahem*
Magic Potato in the chat,
I’m sitting at your welcome mat.
If I may if I might:
(for I think I have a right)
I admit, I can be shy,
When I know not the reason why,
Some benefits, I’d like to see.
A potato, why should I be?
(please)

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Sadly, I do not know if I am going to get another chapter to you this week. I had a plan for it, and it was going well, but then one of my characters was taken hostage and is threatening to ruin the whole rescue mission and I can’t figure out how to get him out of there. Alan…[Read more]

@keilah-h
Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

I am editing up the next section an should post it soon. 

Good. I’m going to be working on my own book/school assignments, so I probably won’t read it until my break at work.

So wait, are you older or younger then your brother?

I’m the eldest. Remember that whole eldest child sympathy party I started with Martha?

Yes, God can…

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I’m back!

You and thinking my characters are older then they are! What is it with you!? lol.
Actually, it wasn’t so bad as last time. Adrian is younger then Aaron was, so yes, seventeen. (what made you guess that number?) He’s seven years older then Joseph. I have a sweet little friend at church who is seven years younger then i a…

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@ellette-giselle

 Forth section:

Joseph looked up at Darrien. His face was white, and his finger’s tightened on the door frame. He used his other hand to gently push Joseph back. “Please, the children had nothing to do with it, nor did the women. I was the one who hid him. Take me but leave the others.”

This felt unessasary. Julian only said t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Poor Linus. You’ll have so much catching up to do. Sorry.

Yeah, yesterday was rather busy. Oh well. I have time today.

(By the way, I should let you know that I’m not bothering to read the  feedback others are giving you, so if anything has come up that you want more thought on, please let me know.)

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@ellette-giselle

Feedback for the second section:

Don’t have too much to say about this one. Joseph kind of falling back to where he was before, but it is easy to see why.

He could hear Noah and Sabina praying together, and for a moment he thought Aaron was captured, for this was how it had been.

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@ellette-giselle

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!

Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.) Ellette, what are you doing to Joseph?

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