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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here we go. Are you ready?
I think you can tell what direction I’m going with this, but I want to hear your thoughts before we see what Alan does. What do you think Alan should do and why?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Enjoy your semi-break!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
What do you request? Random writing on here for the island story I’ve been making up on the spot, or more TNPT?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Yeah, but all I could think about was the last couple of scenes while I was making it. I guess that kinda affected the way it came across.
I kind of woundered that.
Yeah, that’s better! Now I can see a picture that was blocked before. The man with his arms in the air. I think that cries redemption louder than the red text.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
I think this is different. He’s not afraid of himself failing at this time, and he’s not afraid of people. He’s stressed out that his wife might get sick with an incurable plague. I feel like it’s different. *shrug* maybe not.
Ah, okay. Maks sence.
You wouldn’t have without seeing the board! lolol
Guess so.
Did I say Beric was…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?
It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or break free from the darkness. Not a big fan of the font. But this does fit the tone…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months ago
I didn’t even realize what was wrong in your meme, Ellette, until Rax posted his.
Gandalf not seem to like jokes much.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)
Yes, but it was more of the expression than the hair.
Eric whooped.
I see Eric’s taken up a new hobby, teasing everyone for any signs of love. He better watch his back if he gets a girlfriend.
Joseph drew in a shuddering breath. “I’m so afraid for you…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Forgot to return here.
The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.
Now I have 20. What to do with them?
Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
The first one you used on the David one looks like a good image if someone was to create a board for my character Alan. It’s a somewhat troubled, somewhat determined look. (Steals for future drawing reference).
From those boards, David brings Frodo Baggins to mind whereas Stephen’s makes me think of Pippen Took.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter. 30 chapters now. Wow.
Chapter the 30th – The Regretful
Also, of those of you who found spell images disturbing, there will be no more descriptions of them for the remained of this book. So you can continue reading without have to worry about that.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
Covid 19 was not the plague.
more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.
Oh, right.
Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:
Watch out, Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Okay. I’ll be working on that right away. I did get called into work unexpectedly today, so it will take longer than I was hoping, but I hopefully will post the next chapter soon.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.
Out of curiousity, is this a Bible study or a church service?
Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?
William looked up and something flickered through his eyes. “I did you k…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
I also really want another chapter from Linus.
Of TNPT or the boy stranded on the island story I’ve been putting on this forum?
How did you get Mark Rober on your side?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 1 week ago
Please don’t burn me at the stake, but fruitcake is AMAZING and an essential part of Christmas.
When someone comes into the bulk food store and buys the glased fruit to make a fruit cake after I just cleaned the scoops.
Me:
I can’t wait for this part of Christmas to be over…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 1 week ago
Yes, I do celebrate Christmas. My dad loves the season and has a playlist with over 1000 tracks on an old iPod that is played throughout December every year. We build jigsaw puzzles (many of them). Christmas Eve is when we open gifts as a family, and on Christmas day we head out to my grandparent’s church.
Our church throws a…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post.
Sorry, a large final assignment pounced out of nowhere on me and I spent the last couple of days working on it and another final assignment. I also had to work for the last two days. But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!
I…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 2 months, 1 week ago
My characters are separated into groups/by themselves at the moment, but they are going to meet up at some point in the not so distant future. I think there are two together, and the other four are alone somewhere, but two of them will meet up shortly.
That could work then.
I might write that question on a sticky note and stick it to…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
At long last, Joseph introduced them to David, who shook hands all over again. Then, they hurried to the sitting room. The whole family was quickly introduced, and the hugging and handshaking began all over again. At last, Joseph reached out and took Amelia’s hand, leading her up to his family.
Everyone met everyone, y…[Read more]
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