@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
I should let you all know. Starting next week, I will not be able to write as much. Not only am I starting three post-secondary courses, but I will also begin a part-time job (finally). I also have learned that I am now the main teacher for my Sunday School class at church, so…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Wow! That was good!
Thanks!
I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
I’m trying not to overuse his name, so I throw in some other things to call…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Okay
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Okay, I will see what I can do. Maybe you should tag some people other than me as well.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Sure thing! Take it away, Min!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Oh, sorry @theducktator, I butchered your tag. Two posts up from here.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Yup, didn’t work.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
@rae @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theshadow @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @ducktator
Do we have any volunteers for the next drawing challenge? I know Ducktator, you mentioned earlier you might have a character.
If not, I do have a friend, another Christian author, who attempted to make an account on…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Ah okay. I didn’t mean upset as in angry, I meant upset more as in annoyed mildly, so no, you didn’t seem overly cross or anything at us.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Next chapter. This is my Gospel chapter, the firehose of Christianity if you will. I hope that I am not being too forceful with this, I am hoping that any unbelievers who read this will consider what is being said instead of being turned off by it. It is a little weird since…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Thank you for the suggestions. I was kind of surprised that they were all movie soundtracks. Listening to the Ender’s Game one right now.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
I should also mention, it is good you include this scene. If you can inspire your readers to think of marriage more Biblically, that is excellent, especially in this day and age. Use Aaron and your story to guide your reader to think about this more deeply.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
“You two wouldn’t understand. Maybe when your older––” Aaron broke off, seeing the looks the two gave him. Then he laughed at himself. “I forgot, both of you are older then I am.”
Arron, you are really letting responsibility get to you too much. My brother tells me this when he’s trying to be funny.
Aaron is really studying his…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Just please let me share some good writing soundtracks (or any other thing you want to do soundtracks) with you. 🙂
Okay. What do you got?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
I can see why you got upset with the way everyone did the hair. Looks good! I take it this is of him when he is king?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months ago
Is your meme with Death in it from the book All My Friends are Dead?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
This is an… interesting idea. I don’t know if I will participate, but seems you have a few other volunteers.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Congratulations! You are at two wins now! I don’t know if I’ve asked you this or not yet, but what software do you use for your drawings?
Congratulations on second place!
Again with the hair!
You described him having ‘chin-length hair’, so I looked that up for men, and drew what I found. I suppose…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
I was kinda surprised when that was the song that came up when I clicked the link but I’m not complaining haha
Never be surprised if a song I provide is from a video game. Most of the music I listen to is from video games.
Also, I realized I forgot to answer your question from earlier.
one question: Did Jesus come to die in this un…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
WAY BETTER!
Good!
Ok, the magic thing is a little fuzzy still.
That’s because I forgot about that one. Oops. Thanks for the suggestion though, I think I have a good idea on how to fix this.
Ooo, I like the Charles song!! – Ellette
OOH I LOVE THAT SONG. – Keliah
Ocarina of time does have a good soundtrack. Just fo…[Read more]
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