Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

Understandable. With the weddings and grad’s you’ve had, I know it can be hard to find the time.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @grcr @the_lost-journal @hybridlore @theducktator @stephie

Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister’s book?

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 32 out!

@ellette-giselle

Wait until I am back on please.

@ellette-giselle

Ah yes, I remember the first couple of chapters of this on in The Chat Chat.

But yeah, I’m going to be taking a break from my computer after I finish the draft of my current project. But once I am done my break I will let you know and can help out from there.

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter the 31st out!

@hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium

All right! Thank you both! I’m happy to hear you found it interested. It will probably be a while until I return to this, but if I ever do I will let you know.

The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating.

Yeah, making that work is going to be a bit of a c…[Read more]

Proton docs link:

https://drive.proton.me/urls/S97F6F45SG#yYjNNPFyBy0Z

Google docs link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zyuStAitYHhUzO2MumqPxK1MIYbpeJAz0gFjRHNM7i0/edit?usp=sharing

@ellette-giselle

The thing is I relise I’ve been spending way too much time on the computer and my phone recently. I think I need to take a break. So the plan is, once I am done the draft of my current work in progress, to take a step back from electronics for a bit and actually do some real things, like touch grass again. (Ah… grass…). For…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I will try to get you some answers before too long

@ellette-giselle

Thank YOU for all the help. All of you have been so kind and helpful. Never could have rewritten this without help.

Your welcome! Let me know one you have the feedback questions ready please!

@ellette-giselle

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

Still seems kind of ‘as you know’ish.

Something along those lines. What if he says ‘it was a painting from [_____]. Flavia loved the knight in it an…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Rowan shook his head. “No, just any soldier younger than twenty-seven.”

I don’t know too much about war or armies, but I know enough to know that is a bad idea. Especially since it is the younger ones. That’s got to be more than half of his army! Is he trying to be the blood god? Yuck.

Good to see Rowan be saved and some hin…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners make quick side connections so they can focus on the main line of thought. Idk.

Well the problem is that it is kind of weird. It…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

There were from some far-off country— we don’t have knights here.

They, not there.

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

“And then I put it on. There was a helmet that completely covered my face so that no one could ever recognize me or tell…

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@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 30 out!

@keilah-h

is it bad that I can perfectly read that as “potato” now that I know the context?? lol

Yes. But not because of you. It’s because of our weird language where noses run and feet smell and the inconsistent way we spell things.

@ellette-giselle

So they are captured now. Well, it was only a matter of time…

“Lord, help us top trust you,”

To trust.

“I don’t know. I guess I’m a little nervous,” Leon replied. “I don’t know what they’re going to decide, and everything seems so confusing. I was ready to give my life for Christ, yet now it seems that has been thrown aside…

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