Linus Smallprint

@theducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Thank you all of you!

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I am all caught up. No, I did not get your reply. Probably Gmail deciding it is the superior email system, throwing it out before I get it.

@whalekeeper ^

@ellette-giselle @whaley @keilah-h @theducktator @stephie

Finished a drawing of Alan and Martha! I meant to post this yesterday, but couldn’t log into Kingdom Pen for some reason. But now here it is!

@ellette-giselle

KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

Yup. I couldn’t get into my account for a while, so I emailed you feedback on the latest two sections. I don’t know if you saw that. But I’m back now! Maybe I should code up a new website…

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for your feedback!

@ellette-giselle

Wanna take a crack at what Leon’s not telling, or have ya got no idea?

Not at the moment, no. I had some thoughts, but Julian already guessed them aloud. I’ll wait and see what else you reveal.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, so you did actually make them stay. But you’re zooming through this as well in order not to interfere with the pacing. That works.

 It was late one evening and Julian was wandering aimlessly through the halls of the University.

I’m glad for this scene. Before I read this section, I was hoping your next section would have…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Finally got around to working on my outline. 1,350 words. Phew! I got to get to work right away, so I will throw my snowballs later.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Okay, I’ve begun the 9-point outline and managed not to huff, puff, and blow it all down to start over again after filling three points of it. Phew! Finally, have something down for each point. Most of this you have seen already, but not in this structured form. I wrote this with the intention of the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator

I’m still struggling to get through an outline, but it’s not working out well. I keep on getting to judgmental with myself, trying to write the perfect outline. I keep thinking, ‘ is this really what Alan would do? Is he unlearning what he learned in book I here? Is that a bad thing for his character…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m glad you enjoyed it! Definitely a new feel.

Well, thank you for venturing into new grounds! This does help freshen up this story from the others.

@ellette-giselle

“When I read the gospels, it was clear that they were written by four different men, and that being so, those four different men record what they saw, how they saw it, and what details they believe were most important,” Heinrich explained. “Matthew, for instance, has a long genealogy in the beginning of his account and write…

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@hybridlore

I don’t think you are going overboard with different aspects of Sara’s character. The different aspects of her character aren’t distracting from each other. Her synesthesia gives he a unique perspective on the world. Her depression is a flaw she is seeking to overcome. Her love of facts interests her, and as my editor says,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Julian dropped onto the bed and folded his hands behind his head. “Why? Who’s going to read it?”

Why is Julian asking this question when he is also documenting event is his own journal?

The five joined the townspeople and listened to the students, who were marked by the brown, wide-sleeved, open robes they wore over their tunic…

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@ellette-giselle

Roland looked up. “I’m going with you.”

Called it.

“Well, Roland, what’s next on our path to the Capital?”

So they are heading to the capital then. Did I just miss this earlier? I really need to stop missing things.

“None that has lived to tell the tale,” Roland replied. “Though one boy was found drowned in the river a few days…

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@ellette-giselle

Hmm, well I did this for a few reasons. One, we’ve heard this all before in Ardenta and I want these books to have a little bit of a different feel than those, ya know.

Ah.

This is also supposed to be a very fast paced book, because I do want you to feel some of the rush and speed that the characters themselves go through. At t…

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@ellette-giselle

So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)

Are there two or three more?

There are 6. Quinton was almost the name of the fifth, but my Gunny (who was very picky when it came to names) decided to make that his middle name instead. So you still have 3 to go.

So,…

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@hybridlore

Hey! Our could snap just ended up here in Canada, We are finally in plus temperatures, and there’s hope that spring exsists! I don’t need 10 snowballs being hurled at me!

But I guess I can’t argue with being hit.

Currently working on outlining my second book right now. I will let you know when I’ve met the quota.

@ellette-giselle

Glad you are back! I hope things went well with that.

Where were we? Ah yes, you were stealing names from my Gunny for your characters. (No, I won’t tell you what she named my dad’s other three brothers. It will be funnier if you stumble across those names by accident.)

I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed…[Read more]