Linus Smallprint

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 18 out!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 17 out!

@ellette-giselle

Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.

No worries. It’s not your fault if Kingdom Pen decided not to notify you.

@ellette-giselle

Haha, says the guy talking to the lady with 16!

Nice! I only have had 9 in total.

Thanks, I got it.

Your welcome! Thank you for volunteering to read it!

@keilah-h

I like it so far. I’m not super immersed in the world yet, but that’s cause I have no idea what the world is, and whether these characters are human or something else.

The only intelligent species in this world is humans. My sister wouldn’t write a book with any other intelligent species in.

A short section like the one at the beg…

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@ellette-giselle

Okay, I added you. Check your email, it may have went to your spam. It will be from my hotmail account (I have way too many email addresses)

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 16 out. I put it both on Proton and Google

The second part of this chapter was probably one of the hardest to write so far. I felt just as awkward writing this as Alan felt in it. I think the book needs a scene like this though at this point, so I pressed. I’ll see what you all think.

@grcr

I got around to asking my sister for what type of feedback so is looking for. And yeah, she just wants your thoughts on the story in general for now.

@hybridlore @the_lost-journal @keilah-h

All right, thank you!

@stephie

Seems like others can, so don’t worry about it if you can’t.

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 15 is out gang!

I think I need to rethink this chapter a little. I have no intensive to take James side in here, it just seems like he is being irrational for no reason. I also really need to work on Sara. She has zero character development because I’ve only just thrown her…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Stripe with the girl hugging him? Didn’t you see that one? Or are you referring to the generic Kunulf with the crossbow?

The climbing one was for an essay I write about a year ago on whether or not it is okay for Christians to write fiction. I wanted to have it published on here, which is why I joined this site, but the Kingdom…[Read more]

*Right. I meant to say right, not left

@grcr

Thank you!

Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?

I think she just wants to know what you think of the characters, world, and story. She may have some questions for you to answer once you a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoops! Accidentally tagged myself instead of you

@linus-smallprint

Here you go: https://drive.proton.me/urls/7FTVZ5ZDVR#qZ3ixOGvq1e0

@ellette-giselle

Give me one second, and I will share with you a document showing you how to do this.

@ellette-giselle

Site glitches are downright annoying.

I didn’t know that proton did that with docs.

You use Proton, right? Well that’s a way you can share your work without posting it directly on Kingdom pen. You can invite specific people to it, or create a share link that you can take down any time you want.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator

Just checking, did you see this?

I should probably tag some more people as well:

@whalekeeper @liberty @raxforge @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

None of you have to read this, but I do want to make sure this notification is coming through. And my sister would greatly appreciate…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Was that response cut off partway through?