@lightoverdarkness6
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
@felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @gwyndalf-the-wise @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @theloonyone @loopylin @whalekeeper
@esther-c (HeY hEy!)
jkjk XD
@thearcaneaxiom (here’s where I post chapters! You’ll be kinda lost if you start here, no pressure on reading the whole thing though, ik it’s a bit long)
Ok next chapter! I have more than this…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @felicity @sarafini @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6
Bringing this back up lol
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Keilah H. posted an update 3 years, 2 months ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @anyone-else-I’ve-been-talking-to-recently
It’s my birthday week this week, and I’m going to be busy in the next few days, so…I might not reply to everything. I might be on Monday and Tuesday, but Wednesday…[Read more] -
Ava Blue replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 2 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 I like your playlists! Dan Bremnes used to be one of my favorite artists 😄
I’ve been working on Bronwen’s playlist! Not all of these are clean, so I’ll include a disclaimer next to the ones that I know have language.
The Chain – Fleetwood Mac (mild language)
Rounds – The Oh Hellos
Lipstick – WILLOW
Everlong (a…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Kiri
Kiri smiled as Asher blushed furiously, stuttering out his words. She batted her eyes, gripping his arm.
“Great! Off we go then! Lila?”
Lila raised a brow at her, pursing her lips. Kiri shrugged slightly, exchanging a look with her cousin.
So maybe she could ease off on the teasing a bit…
But where was the fun in th…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @acancello @whalekeeper @anyone-I-missed
New question for y’all!! (Or rather your charries 😉 )
What is your favorite food or meal?
Ami: Anything like a warm, comfort food. Like a bowl of stew or soup.Ev: I don’t real…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Ooof, I did? *Face palms* Sorry! 😅😅
Naw, you’re good. 🙂
XDXD Yeah, sometimes when you’re editing, you change something…and then your’e like “Oh now I need a new title!” XDXD That’s how I am 😅😅
YESSS!!! XDXD
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Aww I love those!! Finding the right title is so fulfilling 😀!!
Thanks!
It is!! 😀
I think you said that the last time I changed it…
he… he… he…
XDXD
Like I said, it’ll probably change again anyway. XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
hmm…well, what is motivating him to be a villain.
besides maybe revenge.
Before he ever wanted to kidnap Asher, maybe because of revenge or bad feelings, what motivated him to be whoever he is? Ruthless and cold.
Did he want power? That will kinda help decide what motivates him rn, because that motivation is w…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 aww it’s alright though Aaron is not going to be happy (or know what to do…)
Aaron
Aaron’s heart dropped into his stomach as the man pulled a small, glittering knife from his side, holding it against Bren’s skin.
Bren stopped struggling, going completely still, which was, in itself a scary sight to beho…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c
You guys I got this grid thingy and these matching clips at the dollar store (dallar .25 store apparently 😑)… super random ik…
But I’m going to make it into like a drawing and writing moodboard thingy! And I wanna have maps of my world and stuff on there! Rn it’s just Lesli on…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ok sorry bout that y’all! Was in a meeting all day then had to clean lol. Idk if y’all are still on but I kinda hope u are for a bit but it is nighttime so…sigh
Aaron
Aaron stared at the newcomer, wrapping a hand around his cloak. Something didn’t feel right about this man…
But…Aaron had never ventured ou…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 2 months ago
AHHHH YALLLLLL!!!!!!!!! I AM SOOOO STOKED RN!!!
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
ok idk if anyone on here listens to NF (warning some of his songs are dark, others are fine)
I use a lot of his songs for my charries, a lot of them being for corvina. He is a “Christian” Rapper, who has suffered a lot in his life (Abuse, he has OCD…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Aw, good! Oh awesome!! XDXD I have that same problem. (But hey, I couldn’t tell that they looked orangey in the drawings you posted! They looked great :).
Thanks! XD
It’s a major improvement lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Carter and Carmen
“Wh-wh-where is my s-sister?”
“I’m so sorry… you need a hug?” Lesli took a step closer towards him. “You can hang out with us until we find her.”
Matthew was breathing hard and fast. He stared at Lyla’s seat, his eyes unfocused. Carter stood and leaned forward on the table, looking in…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Great! I’m pretty good, just went to micheals and the dollar store so automatically pretty good day lol. I got some better skin color markers so now my people won’t look orangey XD
Hey your on too!
How’s it going?
(for both of you)
Have you guys been writing at all?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @felicity @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, ok, ok…
I have finally figured out the titles for the books in the Endoxos Trilogy. Here they are!!
1. Ember of Hope
2. Spark of Courage
3. Fire of Truth
But again… even though I think I’m sure on these, they are liable to change. Like, I’m not sure…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Yeah, I think that’s probably the best arch. It is very simple, and somewhat common, but that doesn’t mean it can’t be done really well, it fits the situation and themes the best. And if done well, as I’m sure you’ll be able, I think it will add up for a really good story worth the read!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 Aaron, Bren, and Freedom’s characters Lily (Riker’s daughter) Albert and Elias (Leon’s Sons)
Freedoms are in their mid 20s
Aaron is 15
Bren is 10
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Happy Birthday! Hope you have fun on your trip!
@keilah-h Happy birthday girl!!! Hope you have a great week!!💕💕🥰🥳🎉
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 Thank you!
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Happy birthday Keilah!!!