@lightoverdarkness6
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-GRCR- posted an update 1 week, 1 day ago
@lightoverdarkness6 | Happy birthday, almost-birthday-twin!! 🤠🎂
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Esther started the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Hey everyone!! So my lovely beta-reader (@hybridlore ) was so awesome in giving me feedback on the first draft of an older WIP (this was the one I had asked for help with a little while back). I’m planning to start digging into the editing phase this week and hopefully have the second draft finished sometime in March (we’ll see… sometimes life…[Read more]
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freedom started the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @trailblazer @acancello @godlyfantasy12…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 1 month, 1 week ago
Ok, I’m tagging a lot of people for this, but don’t feel obligated to reply.
So, I’ve gotten stuck in my current WIP, but as I work through that slowly, I want to return to an older WIP that I worked on over the summer and really want to refine. It’s only in a first draft, but I’d like to have a critique partner for it.
The type of critique…[Read more]-
Actually, I’mma remake the moodboards, hehehe. So they shall be revealed later this week. :PP
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I replied but didn’t tag you. Not sure if you got it.
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I would be willing to try and help with this. You know my views on Romance are rather different than norm, and I believe highschool romantic relationships aren’t healthy. But I’m willing to give it a shot.
I also do edit. I’m not a line-by-line editor, but I have worked as a plot/character/story editor before.
We do have different beliefs on…[Read more]-
I appreciate the offer!! Truly!
But like you said, we might not work super well together because of our different viewpoints. So yeah, right now I’d say no, but I will keep you in mind! :))-
No problem! I can be your last resort if no one else offers. 😉
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Sounds good. 😉 Let me know if you want to be tagged when I post the chapters on here some time! :))
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Mm. Sounds interesting, but I’m totally unqualified. I don’t think I’d be able to help much… Sorry… 😅😑
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Hey no worries! 🤗
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I’m sorry, I don’t think I can help you 🙁
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That’s totally fine, girl! ☺️
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I’m definitely interested in reading your novel, but I’ve read almost no YA, so I wouldn’t be much help.
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No worries! I’ll be sure to tag you tho when I start sharing it on here!!
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Awesome! 🙂
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@esther-c I would love to help! This went into my spam for some reason, so I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you. Are you still looking for someone?
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Actually…I think you might be perfect. You gave some great feedback on my short story, so I’m sure you could do the same for my novel! :))
I’ll PM you later this week with more details and the link to the doc. Thank you so much!!! 🤗-
Awesome! I love family and sibling dynamics, and I also read a good amount of YA, so this seems right up my alley! (Although I won’t be able to help much with the 90s references, haha.)
Do you still have my email from the short story critique?-
Yay yay!! (Oh I know, right?? I’ve asked my parents and some other older writers I’ve met through KDWC, and even though they gave me a lot to use [plus Google, lol], there’s still something difficult about getting it right since I didn’t live then 🤪)
Yes I believe so!-
@esther-c Yeah, that totally makes sense! I was gonna say, ask your parents xD. But I’m sure it’s still difficult.
Great!! 😄
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I may have to get some YA recs from you sometime, because I struggle to find clean fiction that I would actually enjoy 😭
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Oh definitely! I’m sure I can come up with a list. Middle grade stuff can be great if it’s well done, because content is so much better. 😉
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@hybridlore
Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe. -
For sure!! Until you come across that one middle school relationship that somehow works out perfectly. 😂
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Ok for some reason even though I still see your comments on the short story doc, it won’t let me view your email. 😅 Could you share that again with me so I can share the other doc?? I’ll tell you as soon as I see it if you don’t want to leave your email up.
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Awesome! Tysm!! I’ll probably send you the doc tomorrow since I need to make a few notes on it first. :))
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Ok I added you to the document! You should get an email about it I believe. (:
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Hoo boy. I’d love to, but uhhhh…I wouldn’t be any help. I’m a terrible critiquer and my romance experience is practically nil. You would probably help me more than I help you….sorry!
Funny enough though, my own romance work (a fanfic) took place in 1970 in New Mexico. What are the odds?
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Ahh, no problem! :))
No way! That’s so cool! XD-
Yeah it was just a consequence of how the original story was set up, but it’s funny to think about.
I doubt your characters will experience anything even close to mine though lol-
Oh dear, was it a Star Wars fanfic?? In that case, I hope my charries aren’t handling the types of weapons they use. 🤣
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No, it was something else, but yeah there were a lot of weapons involved XD
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My Star Wars fanfics don’t really cross over into our world. Yet.
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Though I suppose in a fanfic, you could do whatever 🤷🏻♀️
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Oh duhhhh 🤦🏻♀️ I’ve watched like all the Star Wars movies, I should know they don’t take place on earth 🤣
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lolllll no biggie.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed @liberty @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore
(tagging people who seem to like mood boards.
Maybe) @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @keilah-hNew Character I just added into my WIP. (originally he was the be…[Read more]
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freedom posted an update 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
Who’s ready for Monday??? 😭✨
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MEEEEEE
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Sitting here with cash in one hand and an eye on the amazon page!!!!!
Oh man I CAN’T WAIT!!!!
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So excited!!!
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yeaaaaahhhhh let’s goooooo
I might not be able to get it the minute it comes out but I will certainly buy it!!!
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I JUST BOUGHT A COPY!!!!!!!!
*Dances around the room screaming*
I can’t wait!!!!!-
AHHHHHHHHHHHH😭✨✨✨
I CANT WAIT TO HEAR ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK OF IT!!!!
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I just got it today and I’m going to start it the moment i can!!!!!
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle awww thank you💜😭 and a lot of practice XD
@koshka haha, it’s a Robin Hood/1600s/Fantasy Marvel/MCU AU fanfic😂
@keilah-h thanks! :3
@lightoverdarkness6 AHHH GIRLY THANK YOU. yes, he’s a Robin Hood of sorts. I’m sharing the fanfic in it’s own forum here on KP if you wanna read it! I actually think I may have a new chapter or two…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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freedom posted a new activity comment 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@lightoverdarkness6 No need to apologize!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLY💜💜💜💜 I LOVE YOU MORE!!!!!YESS and I just wanna meet you irl, soooo😂💜💜💜
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@freed_and_redeemed OFCCC 🤍🤍🤍 Awww🥹
OMGOODNESS YESS 🤭🤍🤍 Same girl, I wanna meet you so bad🫶
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @lightoverdarkness6 @rae @smiley @anyone-else
ik this is for a fanfic I’m writing, but I wanted to share anyhow😛
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-GRCR- replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle posted a new activity comment 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Okay, I’m moving this over so that people can delete their messages once I have the emails.
@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @godlyfantasy12 @trailblazer @ellette-giselle @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @rae @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theduc…[Read more]
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Ooh, this actually sounds awesome.
I don’t think I’ll be in town next Saturday though, unfortunately. But if there’s a next time, can you tag me for that one please?
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Yes of course! You want to give me your email now so I can add you to the email list?
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I deleted the message so it probably deleted your reply but uh yeah, I guess it fits.
It was both me and my brother’s initial on there cause it was his too before he got a separate one-
fun!!
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yeah, so uh….whenever you’re doing this again just send it to me!
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got it!
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I’ll probably add you to the email stream for this week just so that you can be in the group address I’m going to form. Is that okay?
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Okay, I guess that works!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @rae @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofatherium @liberty @mineralized-writings @lightoverdarkness6 @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @kyronthearcanin @grcr
Everyone please tag any girls I forgot!!!
This morning, Koshka, Elishavet, Ellette, Hybridlore and I went on a video call via…[Read more]
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freedom posted an update 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Broken Shackles is officially coming January 27th, 2025💜 thank you all for your friendship, love, and continued support…it literally means the…[Read more]-
@freed_and_redeemed
AHHHH girl I’m so proud of you!!!!
ahhh love you girl, you’re amazing <3-
Congratulations!!! That’s exciting!
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Ahh!! So exciting!!! CONGRATS!!! 🥳
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I’m definitely not crying rn because i’m so excited that it’s finally coming out
THAT’S SO GREAT!! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!!!!
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🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊
AHHHHHH!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!! I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!…[Read more] -
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
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AYYY That’s awesome! Congrats!!! Can’t wait to buy/read itttttt (hopefully)!!!
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EEEEEE I can’t wait!!
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HURRAH!…[Read more]
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YAY! Congratulations! *Dumps several buckets of confetti everywhere*
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@freed_and_redeemed I know I’m not on much but this came through my email and AHHHH I HAD TO COME AND SAY CONGRATS FREEDOM 😭 IM SRSLY SO HAPPY FOR YOU! And while I don’t read historical fiction I already knew I was gonna be buying ur books girl. I HAVE TO OF COURSE!!! I ALREADY HAVE KNOWN THE CHARRIES! THE BABIES!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!
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@godlyfantasy12 you just made my day😭😭 THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH💜💜💜😭 And yes, they’re available on Amazon! (Freedom’s Fire is in paperback, hardback, and Ebook; Broken Shackles is only paperback and EBook) I’ll send the link in a minute 😊 and I’d love to get you a signed copy…you just gotta meet me…[Read more]
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WHY DIDN’T I KNOW UR OTHER BOOK WAS PUBLISHED AHHHH WHY AM I SO FAR BEHIND IN EVERYTHING SOOOB I WOULD’VE ALREADY BOUGHT ITTTTTTTTTTT @freed_and_redeemed
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Will it be available on Amazon? If not, where at? I’m a paperback girly for the most part!!!
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@godlyfantasy12 there’s the link!
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Awesome!
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@freed_and_redeemed thx! ALSO!!! U may have said this somewhere else but since idk exactly how ur running ur series…which book is the brothers in…? (MY SWEET SWEET BABIESSSSS!!! I NEEEEED MY WOLFIEEEEE AND RUEBEEEEN AND ALL MY OTHER DARLINGS)
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@godlyfantasy12 haha, I get it! XD Sooo my main focus atm is Leon/Riker’s trilogy, which means all 3 novels are only Leon and Riker as POV characters.
HOWEVER, the Bois first appear in Freedom’s Fire and will also appear in Book 3 (they’re not in book 2, tho, sadly).
And I have plans for them to have their own novel eventually, it’s just more on…[Read more]
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ALSO UMMM ONE DAY I WILL BE NEEDING A SIGNED COPY MAAAAAM
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yoooo you’re here! how’s your writing going?
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@keilah-h It’s…not really at the moment lol
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lol that happens.
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@savannah_grace2009 @liberty @smiley @ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @keilah-h @koshka @theducktator @grcr Thank y’all so much😭😭💜
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I LITERALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE COVER!!!
GIRL!!!!-
yessss the cover is awesome.
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You’re so welcome!!!!!
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I’m so sorry I’m so late on this but
OH MY GOODNESS GIRL CONGRATS!!!! I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR YOU AHHHHH 🥳🥳🥳😭😭😭 SO HAPPY RNNN!!! I cannot WAIT to get Broken Shackles!!! Love you so much girl!!! <333
And someday I'll definitely have to come to one of your book signings and get a signed copy🤭
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@lightoverdarkness6 No need to apologize!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLY💜💜💜💜 I LOVE YOU MORE!!!!!YESS and I just wanna meet you irl, soooo😂💜💜💜
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@freed_and_redeemed OFCCC 🤍🤍🤍 Awww🥹
OMGOODNESS YESS 🤭🤍🤍 Same girl, I wanna meet you so bad🫶
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@koshka @grcr @liberty @keilah-h @rae @esther-c @theducktator @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelsewhomightbeinterested.
Have any of you seen The Man Who Invented Christmas? It’s the story of how Charles Dickens wr…[Read more]
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freedom posted an update 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Hiii y’all. I’ve been pretty absent from KP if you haven’t noticed😅XD
In between catching up on school, church, family, life, a bit of writing, drawing,…[Read more]-
*SCREAMS*
The end of this month!!!!!
*goes and checks the Leon and Riker fund*
I’ve got the money all ready and waiting!!!
Wow I’m so excited!!! I can’t wait! Yippity yippity yippity!I’m doing pretty good! We’ve got some crazy stuff going on, and my dad’s job is stressful at the moment because it always is after the people are done tearing…[Read more]
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Ah…those noisy charries…they just beg for attention! I am feeling the same way right now. I’m working on Buddy Brindle, but this newest story idea (the one inspired by sleep terrors) just keeps popping into my mind! My poor dogs! They’re getting neglected!
Did you know? Charles Dicken’s son said something very similar about…[Read more]
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This month? EEEEEEEE! That’s awesome!!
2025 is going great so far! Finished my latest fanfic New Year’s and I’m currently having my brother beta read it.my characters? They’re doing pretty well. I have a new idea that’s fairly original and I kinda want to write it.
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I’m so excited for you!!! I can’t wait to read itttt!!!
2025 writing-wise is off to a slow start, but a start nonetheless! I didn’t write as much as I wanted to during December because I was lacking in motivation (ok, I was just being lazy, lolll), but I’ve forced myself to start writing again and I’m hoping CWW will give me a shove in the right…[Read more]
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END OF THIS MONTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Does a happy dance* YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope it all goes well!
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Ahh!!! I haven’t even bought your first book yet! (I have to collect some money). By the way, how did you find those amazing character pictures that are on your banner????
Well………I’ve been accepted to write a serial story for the Ardent Youth!!!!!! (That’s the Amish magazine I write for). I’m SO excited to do this since…[Read more]
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Oh my goodness I know! Hey, have you watched, “The Man Who Invented Christmas?” It’s the story of Charles Dickens and is so, so cool!
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No, I haven’t seen that film.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @savannahgrace9 @koshka @trailblazer @elishavetpidyon @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @Esther-c @anyone-else (SO MANY PPL GAH)
BRUH I CAME BACK AND THEN GHOSTED AGAIN IM SO SORRY… SOB ITS PROBS GONNA HAPPEN AGAIN NGL ROFL
Basically….Life……Exists now….
Sucks right? ROFL
GAH YALL…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @mineralizedwritings @rae @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @hybridlore @calyhuge @smiley @raxforge @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle
I’m shooting blind, here. No idea who likes these books.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Thank you so, so much! You’re so sweet!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Thank you so much!
*laughs through tears* it’s a good kind of crying.
Sorry. I’ve been having a rough time, and I think God sent you to say that this morning. 😌
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