@lightoverdarkness6
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
Felicity
“Alright, well, mission accomplished. You made it to your class. About time I head to mine.”
Fel turned to leave, giving Chase a playful but gentle punch to the shoulder. She winked.
“It was fun hanging out.”
Then she walked out of the field and back to the school buildin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Me when I lose my spot while archiving this rp and have to scroll back 200+ pages to find it again:
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 16 hours ago
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 18 hours ago
Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱
I understand that though.
A World War II spy story!
Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.
I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 18 hours ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 19 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 19 hours ago
Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 20 hours ago
Ohhhh that makes more sense.
And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 23 hours ago
Really?! Ah yay!!!
Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!
Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 23 hours ago
Boom, finally caught up
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Okay…… I put yes…. but that honestly depends on what kind of time I have. I may have to drop back to feedback…. or nothing.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 2 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 8 hours ago
I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…
The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
Update!
I got Scrivener, and after playing around a bit, I think I’m going to love it. I still haven’t figured out some of the quirks like how to paste into it without turning everything blue. However, I love how it has alowed me to organize each WIP into one individual file with multiple subfiles. It’s also nice to have it off line, so I can…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 2 days, 14 hours ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 15 hours ago
I would love to!
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 15 hours ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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