Lightningmouse

A mad scientist that’s a huge people-person as opposed to the general recluse.

A dark joke. But a legitimately author-ish one, I’ll give you that. 😉
I liked it! I could definitely see from your other writings how you’ve progressed, but this isn’t a bad start at all. Nice and expectant. It piqued my interest for the character, which I believe was your intention. So, good job. 😛

Great job! Good imagery and nice spacing of the lines. 🙂 Free verse poetry has a lot less nitpick opportunities than structured. I couldn’t find anything. But that’s good, right? 😛

Thanks, @kate-flournoy! I’m mostly writing free verse, as I don’t feel completely comfortable with rhyming poems yet. I’ll be sure to watch out for the long lines from now on.

About Beleg, yes, he was a bowman (and, I must say, one of my favorite characters in The Silmarillion), but apparently, one of the translations of my name into Elvish is…[Read more]

Thanks, @kateflournoy! I’m mostly writing free verse, as I don’t feel completely comfortable with rhyming poems yet. I’ll be sure to watch out for the long lines from now on.

About Beleg, yes, he was a bowman (and, I must say, one of my favorite characters in The Silmarillion), but apparently, one of the translations of my name into Elvish is…[Read more]

A dragon with arthritis.
A griffon prone to colds.

Haha, those are great @kate-flournoy!

The villain lives in a treehouse, a hero who is ugly

Haha, those are awesome @anna-brie!

A prince who is selfish (and decides to leave the princess in the tower :P)
A villain who wants to be good but doesn’t know how
A hero who wants to join the villain

…I don’t know; that’s all I’ve got. 🙂

A villain who despises black and so wears lime green all the time.

xD I love that @rolena-hatfield 🙂

Ok, I know I’m late, but welcome to Kingdom Pen @anna-brie! I haven’t been here that long, but I’ve already learned a TON about writing. 🙂 It’s an awesome website! Hope you enjoy it as much as I have. 😀

Awesome! @kate-flournoy It’s a great verse! 🙂

For our struggle is not against flesh and blood, but against the rulers, against the authorities, against the powers of this dark world and against the spiritual forces of evil in the heavenly realms. Therefore put on the full armor of God, so that when the day of evil comes, you may be able to stand your ground, and after you have done…

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@Daeus I think there are plenty of dashing young Frenchmen. XD

A mentor that’s younger than the hero.

A dashing young henchman. There aren’t nearly enough of those.
A gentle-giant Fezzik sort of guy who saves the tough-girl action princess.
An unruly queen constantly being reined in by her dignified daughter.
A plain old dumb dog in the place of all the fancy, super-smart dog types that are always the pets.

Love this topic! Great idea, @hope! 🙂

That’s perfect! @kate-flournoy 😛

Ooo, I like that idea! @writefury

Ooh, yeah! The community Skype hangout would be awesome. 😀

Webinar wise, I was thinking maybe a group deal where we could just talk writer stuffs. Or we could do single cam things with a Q&A or something. I don’t know. Webinars would just be cool. 😛

So, how the faithwriters thing works. They have 4 levels, Beginners, Intermediate, Advanced and Masters. You start in Beginners or Intermediate, depending…[Read more]

Hey, I had an idea as far as contradictions. If she’s banished and rejected by everyone, what if she’s a really big people person and cares a lot what people think of her? I think that might be interesting…