Lightningmouse

Okay, found something about stars wars 7 at last. I have actually never seen any other star wars movie but this, but I know pretty much all of the back story cause of my brothers. I loved this movie! I watched it twice within a few weeks I think. BB-8 is so adorable, he’s one of my favorites. My brother actually got me a little BB-8 miniature for…[Read more]

Hey guys, it’s me! I live in Indiana, and while I love my state, I will admit it is very monotonous. We are best know for corn, soybeans, basketball, and racing. We who live in Indiana are called Hoosiers, but I prefer my made up word, Indianians. And Daeus would be an Ohioite. (I make up a lot of words)
That is weird that most of us are from…[Read more]

Thank you for the welcomes @clairec and @greta!

@BlueJay – I will get you that ice cream when I can do imoticons. I can’t get them on my aunts tablet. Rain check.

@sarah-h – I do plan on reading them all, but currently I have fifty plus books that I have actually written down to red, plus the books that are just recorded in my head… So I…[Read more]

@bluejay
OK. Sorry…I haven’t had time to reply yet. But poetry experimentation is so much fun, so I couldn’t miss out on this topic. 😉
Anyway, sonnets are a lot of fun but pretty hard because of the meter (I’ve only written an “almost sonnet” before). There are two types of sonnets, each containing 14 lines: the English (or Shakespearean…[Read more]

@anne-swiftblade Happy Birthday!!!

That is pretty @Alia 😉 I think the simplicity gives it a soft feeling 😛

If God keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world,
What right does the world have to say “No consequence”

In this bit I think you should take out the “If” at the beginning and maybe add a “they are” between “say” and “NO”.

Other than that it looks great 😉

Thank you for the shout out Corissa! I love acting too. I am the main character who is a girl on a indentured slave ship and gets sold to a widow. I’m rebellious at first and scorn God, but become a Christian in the end. Hey maybe you guys can watch if you come to Fellowship Baptist Church when we perform it!

Thanks for all the critiques everyone. Daues I like that idea, but I was trying to fit it to the rhythm and rhyme and it just wasn’t working, so I decided I would actually use that in a poem I am writing about the villainess in my WIP, the Prince, the Apple and the Tower. She says things like Walloping Warts, and Smatting Snakes, and stuff like…[Read more]

@Hope-Ann Thank you. I can’t wait to see what you think. 🙂

@BlueJay I might have to take my laptop somewhere so they can save the hard drive because I don’t think it’s ever going to start up again. 🙁 I suppose that’s why people used paper, so it couldn’t get erased when your laptop crashed. The only way is if your sister burned it up because…[Read more]

@Daeus, you my friend get a special thanks for all the cookies and ice-cream!!! They were delicious!

Oh my goodness!! You guys are amazing!!! Thank you so much everybody! And @Greta, thanks for the cake 😀 (I love chocolate!)
*Takes a big bite of cake and sighs happily*

@overcomer
No problem! Glad I could help. 🙂

I don’t want to make it too uniform because I want it to meander like the inner thoughts it’s supposed to reflect.

Oh, I see. That’s a really good idea. 😉 Hard to strike that balance, though, I’d imagine. 🙂

@anne-swiftblade, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Sweet Sixteen, too! Hope your day is awesome! 😀

Hope you like chocolate cake! 😉

@anne-swiftblade, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Sweet Sixteen, too! Hope your day is awesome! 😀

@ClaireC
I love this topic idea!

@Sarah-h
I’ll definitely pray. Learning languages is hard, especially when you’re trying to learn them quickly. Speaking and listening to native speakers is the hardest part, but with God, anything is possible. 😉

@Claire-C
I love this topic idea!

@Sarah-h
I’ll definitely pray. Learning languages is hard, especially when you’re trying to learn them quickly. Speaking and listening to native speakers is the hardest part, but with God, anything is possible. 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien
Again, I’m late…but WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN!!! I recognize you from Hope’s blog (I’m gretald on there). 😉
Yesssss! I love your book choices! Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, and The Mysterious Benedict Society are some of my favorites. 🙂

@daeus I’m going to go now. I wrote 160 words to one story and 138 on another. Thanks!