Lightningmouse

Concerning The Count of Monte Cristo,

That was amazing

I can’t even…

I’ve been staring into space for about 20 mins. I’m still in shock….

@daeus @r-j-wordsmith

@jess I’m back!

I’m going to go make dinner now. I edited two chapters, and got an idea for a way to fix the analogy. Thanks everyone!

@winter-rose Augh! I know. Writing it was so much more fun that sitting and using red pens.

@audrey-caylin @that_writer_girl_99 Actually, it’s already finished. You could say I’m editing the first draft. It stands at about 83,000 words, though I have major tweaking to do, because like you, Audrey, I have to incorporate some Christian themes into this thing, making it partway analogy. That has to be hardest part of this book. 😛

*raises hand* First draft!

@that_writer_girl_99 *looks at you suspiciously* Do you not like fried chicken?

@that_writer_girl_99 Dragons like to eat fried chicken. Dragons like to eat ice cream. Dragons love to have fried chicken and ice cream in the same day.

@winter-rose Yep. Still taking as much criticism as I can get. 😛

@daeus Hello!
@winter-rose I am editing my novel, and might move on to edit my contest story, then I shall brainstorm.

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛

I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali

@theliterarycrusader @jenali @audrey-caylin Thank you guys so much for your input! This thread has really given me a lot to think about.

It sounds as if choosing a service (WordPress, Blogger, etc.) really comes down to how serious I am about the whole enterprise. So I need to take some time to figure that out. Thanks again!

@kate-flournoy That’s why it’s only going to be a temporary thing. 😛

@adry+grace. Wow… um… I had no idea my writing was that good yet. Thank you soooo much, this was actually a big encouragement.
Now I look at it, I do like both the end and the beginning a lot, so I will try and improve the middle. I might include both of those suggestions, such as she is in her room when she says I’m crazy I know that, and…[Read more]

@bethanysinkyroses Another Random Answer: No, I don’t think our kidnappers put the fridge off limits, but does that mean you have to eat a banana-split while we’re trying to figure out a way to escape?

I can draw some, but the best artists I know on here are Kate Flournoy and Ethryndal.

*bravely draws in a trembling breath*
I shall… wait. I can. I can wait. Yes, I can. It’s possible. Isn’t it? I shall wait until Thursday, or possibly have to wait until… *gulps* next Monday.
*dissolves into a pool of regret, anticipation, and for some reason laughter*
*collects herself into a swirling mess of a figure*
I shall wait.