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Daeus replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay Is it a thinking cat? Might it have got another pet that could help it escape to form a plot with her?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@DAEUS NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NOT THAT AGAIN!!!! WHAT ON EARTH WERE YOU DOING TOUCHING THE PAPER? AFRAID I WOULDN’T GIVE IT BACK TO YOU OR SOMETHING???
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Daeus replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
AAAAAHH! My hand! Watch where you slam things @kate-flournoy.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Heeheehee… nice @hannah-c. Very nice. Very happy to be of service. 😀
Ahem… because I’m picky, let me improve on your second example a bit…
“Guru approved!” Kate slammed the stamp down on the paper, grimacing as a nearby inkwell skittered across the table with the impact and crashed to the floor.’
😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Hm… is it an old house? The cat could slip down a loose grate into the basement and worm its way out from there… or it could squeeze through a mouse hole (a large one, obviously! 😛 ). Or maybe there was a hole in the screen door, and the outer door wasn’t shut properly… Or it could find its way up into the attic and somehow wriggle out a…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Good example @hannah-c. Kate’s approval showed us a little about her, but her stamping showed us more.
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Daeus replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 10 years, 5 months ago
@vanna Well, I’m actually on the third to last chapter. I’m hoping I can finish it and give it the first round of editing by sometime in July then tidy it up some more and hopefully get it published before the end of the year.
The complicated plot has been – well, complicated, but it can be good to stretch yourself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus drat. I thought I was going to be the first in human history to be teleported through the internet.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy No, I think it only works if you press command T. Try getting a mac.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
*stares contemplatively at post, drops eyes to keyboard* Hm… let’s see… *tentatively presses Ctrl, squeezes eyes shut and jabs T with index finger*
Am I teleported yet???!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Will be writing for about an hour. Tag me if you can join in.
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Daeus replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 10 years, 5 months ago
@vanna Yeah, I just wish all my characters could be that unique. The books called Edwin Brook – That’s my MC’s name. It’s got a deep plot. I probably bit off more than I could chew when I started, but I think I can handle it now.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@the-happy-bookaholic What in the world is forum shiping? Don’t tell me technology is now allowing teleportation via the-the internet?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@the-happy-bookaholic I’m not one hundred percent sure I quite got what you meant there, but it made me laugh so hard… 😀
And now that you mention it, she did use speaker tags quite well. Good for her— do I see a future authoress??? 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@thehappybookaholic I’m not one hundred percent sure I quite got what you meant there, but it made me laugh so hard… 😀
And now that you mention it, she did use speaker tags quite well. Good for her— do I see a future authoress??? 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 10 years, 5 months ago
Oh, and it’s interesting too, because the girl he rescued also changed as soon as he arrived on the scene. Before, she had been a bit vague and I had doubts whether she might end up as a cliche. She seemed too quiet at times, but after Drake appeared, I saw that she was strong willed as well as perceptive as well as somewhat meek (which is an…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Slow is smooth. Smooth is fast.
@kate-flournoy Well, what it means is that if you take a little time in between your writing bursts to make sure what you are about to write is trim, lean, and mean, you will save yourself a lot of time in the long run, though you will have to take some pauses in between your writing.
In the original fencing…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy Well, that’s the point. Smooth is fast.
Now for me, nothing’s fast, but at least I’m faster than I could be by being slower.
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