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@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.

Prologue:

A tree loomed up ahead.

This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.

The girl covered her ginger hair

You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.

The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards

Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.

She wasn’t far fro…

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@I-J-Anderson hey it’s totally not a problem. Life happens. I’m sure all of us understand. 😉
Besides, it’s good to let a topic rest sometimes. Otherwise people get burned out and start hating it.

THE THREE LITTLE PIGS IN SHAKESPEAREAN LANGUAGE?! *delighted scream* THAT SOUNDS AWESOME! :”D Tell me how it goes. I’m sure you’ll do great.

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@Ethryndal *shakes finger reprovingly* Pay attention to your own advice my dear. XD

@theliterarycrusader Do you have this uncanny knack at sounding totally convincing about something you haven’t the slightest clue about? XD

@f5a8c3e92

Step #1: Look at people from the corner of your eyes and say something creepy. This will scare them out of their wits.

Step #2: Turn your head so you’re meeting their gaze full on and slowly pull your mouth into a smile. An evil cackle is optional.

Step #3: At this point, they will be so terrified of you they will just flee.

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@Emma-Flournoy I missed the first sentence and thought you said you were an INFJ. I was like, wait, but you told me— XD Take heed, kids; This is why we don’t speed read.

@theliterarycrusader Oh great, I can’t get away from them. XD I’m officially scared of Josiah too.

@feedingmygoldfish Yeah, most people tell Anna she’s the sweetest thing,…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper I think you need to somehow get these fanatics’ MBTI obsession into your next story…

@f5a8c3e92 You have come to the right internet space for that. *signs you up*

@GracieGirl that’s totally fine. 😉 I can be patient. *cough*I’ll make myself be*cough**cough*

*poof*

What’re ya talkin’ about? Nothin’ just happened. *Jedi mind tricks you* No, nothing odd just happened.

*walks off whistling carelessly*

@emma-flournoy *gasp*

The apocalypse is coming, people. Let’s all bow our heads and pray.

@FeedingMyGoldfish Well hey, at least you don’t need to worry about being an introvert here, as it doesn’t really matter with online communication. I’m waaay less shy online than I am in person, and I’m pretty sure I’m not 85% introvert. 😛 It’s just…easier when the person isn’t actually next to you. For some terrible reason.
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@Daeus Eh well, can’t say I’m not guilty of the same. Guess I’m just not…bold? enough to say in PUBLIC 😮 that I think my own personality type is awesome. 😛
But there you have it. I just said it in public.

@f5a8c3e92 OH. WOW. I… I really like that. *grins so wide she splits her face* Way to go for a cool spin on a unique twist. *thumbs up*

Oh, @theliterarycrusader and @feedingmygoldfish, my sister’s an INFJ, so I know their tendencies… Now I’m scared of you two. XD

@FeedingMyGoldfish Agh, how did I miss the fact that another person has joined our lovely little Kingdom? This is an official welcome from the Elf! Glad to finally meet the person who supports her goldfish by water flinging. 🙂

@That_writer_girl_99 Heh, multi-faceted… Taking over the world, anyone? 😛

(And if so, I want in. *evil cackle*)

Oh my goodnes… I leave for three hours and all this has taken place while I was gone…Oh the wonders of Kingdom Pen.

*joins ranks of INTJs with @Hope*