katie

1: I’ve been many places in my life,
Hawaii, D.C., Californian borders.
And searching the rooftops and signs,
None of them were called home.

V2: I’ve seen many things in my life,
Confusion, sorrows, American dreams,
And piling high through their skies,
None of them brought me home.

V3: I’ve heard many things in my life,
Truces,…[Read more]

I’ve been searching and looking and wandering,
Waiting for far too long.
I’ve been stopping and going then turning,
Wondering what went wrong?
I’ve been watching and staring and blinking,
Trying to remain strong.

The forest is knit around me,
Stretching talons to the sky.
Roots, they trip me in my doubts,
I’m thinking someday I can…[Read more]

I have 140, although I used to have 410+ something verses, but then I lost that account. 🙁
So yeah. I’m trying to work my way back up to that.

@aratrea Okiday, my mom cleared me. You can expect a video from me soon. 🙂

@DaughteroftheKing
Hey, it looks like you’re pretty much covered here but I thought I’d just jump in for a tiny moment. 😉
One thing that puts a character high in my trust books is when they do quiet acts of kindness. Sure, I really
appreciate it when character jumps out of an airplane to save a person plummeting to their death, but that tiny pep…[Read more]

Well, looks like everyone said it first. So… *gestures above* I second what they said.

@dragon-snapper Thus it was that Daniel DeGraaf became a Kingdom Pen legend. XD

@gideon-sowdon It seems I surpass you. I have…ooh. Ouch. 43. *winces*

Being the bestistest place on the internet is what us Kapeefers do best. 😀

@dragon-snapper Very well. I edited about 1,100 words.

@daeus I’m going to sign out now. I wrote about 500 words.

@daeus Yes, I’m here. 😀

@dragon-snapper I’m back if you’re there. I think I’ll go for forty-five minutes to an hour.

@daeus Funny. I wrote 600 something words. 😀

@dragon-snapper Signing off. I edited 600 something words.

@daeus I’m here.

@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.

What makes me trust a character is genuineness.
Although, what really gets me, is if it’s the main character. Or second MC, because no one expects the 2nd MC to be a badguy. Also, you should make him good friends, or supposedly so, with your MC. If Dianne trusts him, I will too. 😀

@DaughteroftheKing Yeah. What he said. XD

@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.

So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]