@lewilliams
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Maps (creative title, I know) in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 4 months ago
@faith-q Well, I’ve handdrawn really bad maps before…just to get an idea of what direction my characters are going. But yeah, there are online map-makers that you can use.
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Sara Ann {Spark} posted an update 3 years, 4 months ago
@daisy-torres ok so i love it’s easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud. where’d you get it!???!! i. love. it. <3 <3 <3 <3 do you know of any other quotes that are similar????
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
@e-k-seaver I honestly don’t have much or any experience with writing or reading Christian fiction, so I honestly can’t be of much help, besides giving you, like, y’know, a regular reader’s perspective. You have my email already, so if you want to send it to me, I’d be happy to give it a read.
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ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Ahhh! I’m at chapter seventeen and I just can’t stop! This book is well-written, intriguing, and TOTALLY PUBLISHABLE!  Make it happen, Emily. This needs to be published.
I just can’t stop thinking about how amazing this is! I don’t know how many times I’ve laughed out loud… (and I seriously almost cried once!) And the chara…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Got it!  So excited, I’ll check it out later today.
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ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
Bahahaha! I know, me toooooo! My sister was really annoyed about how much I was gushing about Dylan… he’s just so amazing! If I could bring any of my charries to life, it’d be him (and then I’d marry him!) XD XD XD
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank ya kindly! <3 Ooo, cool! I’d say Corvina might be a conflicted character, and Arabella might be a really sweet, friendly personality. Am I right? XD
Girl, I’d totally read this! Totally keep writing… GO GO GO! 😉
Thanks! I know, it’s kinda weird to see the dialogue out of context. But th…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Congrats Emily!! I’ll do it! Dystopian is my all time favorite genre. I’m so excited to read this!
My email is ellafinkbeiner11@gmail.com
Thanks for the opportunity!
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@nova21 XD Plenty of adventures to choose from!
I love your lines as well! Dylan sounds like he’d be quite hard to work with.
@writerlexi1216 Felicity sounds like what you described her as. Nice job!
@daisy-torres I’d want to be Catherine’s friend!
@lewilliams I want to meet Horace, like, right now. He sounds so proper.
@elfwing She sounds…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
@nova21 Ay, good luck! Glad I could be of use.
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Kads replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@lewilliams tagged me here, so I figured I’d hop by! Sorry I’ve not been very active on KP; life’s been crazy lately. I’m currently burned out, haha, seeing as I finished my first novel in June. I tried doing NaNo this month but I was too burned out and stopped halfway through… hngh… currently trying to do more with the plotsy side of things.…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Hahaha! I already love Felicity! 😉
He totally sounds like you described him. If I had to go on an adventure now, I’d want him to be the leader! 😉
Can I hang out with Catherine for a day, please? Just a day? XD
Hahaha! Poor Horace. *cough* dumb teenagers *cough* 🙂
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ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey Kayleigh!! Of course! That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂
Hey Elfwing! Thanks!! Oh I totally get that!! That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!
Hey Daisy! Aw, thanks!! That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@nova21 Oo, fun! Hard time to find which MC though, haha…
This is for Nan Jinqi, who’s, um, what is he like… He’s quiet and dependable, I think. Quite observant. Hard-working. I don’t know that much about him yet.
1) “Run!”
2) “It was your stupid machine that crashed and burned, [action tag omitted], And who said I was here to stop you?”
3)…
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, interesting! I think that dialogue fits super well for Dylan, especially since the lines are short. That goes well with his strong-willed personality, in my opinion! As for mine… they’re kinda short, so… XD
MC is Felicity, who is (also) strong-willed, stubborn, and tough, though she’s secretly quite caring.
1) “Huh.” (I know,…
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ella started the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
The title says it all, folks. I just thought it might be fun to compare what your character says to see if the dialogue truly matches their personality or not.
So I’ll share mine first!
MC is Dylan, who is stubborn, quiet, and strong-willed. A little self-protective. Lmk if his dialogue fits his personality.
1) “Better.” (*rolls eyes…
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Ah, yes, the first time I won NaNoWriMo I didn’t write another word for 4 months. Not worth it lol. But since then I’ve built up my writing muscles.
For me I just keep floundering around in water like I’m about to drown. I tell myself I’m gonna keep writing, but in reality it’s so painful I can only get out 100 words a day. But…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
This is ALL too relatable, Lexi! The way I usually (try) to overcome writer’s block/burnout is picking up a different project. I have *counts Scrivener docs* 25 WIPs from the last 2 yrs. Not that they’re perfect. (Or finished.)
This way really helps me to take a step back and pick a project that I’ve been developing pre…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski started the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
*rubs hands together* Yup, I’m sure there’s been a topic about this already, but I’m starting a new one because I
am totallyÂtoo lazy to search wanted to ask… how do y’all get over writer’s burnout? *dun dun dun* So after finishing my novel, Last of Her Kind, the author side of me has been feeling super bummed about what I write and I’ve just be…[Read more] - Load More
@sparksaraabbott11 Thankss!!!! Sadly, I don’t T_T I made it up haha. Thank you though!!!
@daisy-torres your welcome. <3 i love it. have you not invented anymore like that?? SO lovely. <3 <3
@sparksaraabbott11 Aww thanks! Uuum I did one a while back (more writer-themed though) that says “Excuse me if I spill the ink of my mind onto the carpet of reality”, and there’s one in the bible that I LOVE that says “We live our days as a tale that is told”. If I think of any others, I’ll let you know!!
@daisy-torres those are so good! thanks for sharing. <3 and i'd def love more if you think of them!!
@sparksaraabbott11 Thankss!! Sure thing!