@leumeister
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Well, first of at, @dragon-snapper, I have to warn you, you have tagged one of the most picky proof-readers/editors I know – me! So, yeah, it’s only because I want to help make your work the bestistest you can make it. Forewarning, now for some edits 😉
“Daniel!” My brother, Jack exclaimed, just as perplexed. Make the ;m’ in ‘my’ lowercase – tha…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Happy Star Wars day, everyone! May the 4th be with you!
@perfectfifths @daeus @kate-flournoy @all of the star wars fans! -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *raises eyebrows* Don’t you ‘but mom’ me! Go to your room, or I’ll melt the pictures and your chair.
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Snapper started the topic Writing Contests (USA) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hello all!
I am looking for legitimate contests (not fake ones that take your writing and money and then run.) so if you all know of any, I’d like to know. Thank you!
@daeus @kate-flournoy @ethryndal @that_writer_girl_99 @perfectfifths @winter-rose @allthepeople -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien @kate-flournoy @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99
*motherly voice* If you all don’t share your toys, I’ll take it away from you, the easy way or the hard way. Easy way is that you just share it, the hard way is I melt the pictures and no one has them. Be nice. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 What about the beginning confused you? What do you think could be done to make it more clear?
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Snapper replied to the topic Salvete! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@elly I’m sorry for my lateness. I guess you could say that I’m toast. 😛
Anyways…welcome to the forum, enjoy the fun, and watch out for dragons. 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Greetings, all! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@lola-jane I’m late…*sniff sniff* I’m sorry.
Anyways…HELLO! *blows you away with giant dragon hello!*
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 (sorry, just trying to tag you. 😛 )
Nuts. Did I really type the title as Shorty?
@daeus Are you able to make it ‘Short Story-Mystery’ ? 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e9
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
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Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and can’t…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@GracieGirl Oh, definitely. I’ll be praying. Aren’t moms amazing though?!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal Well that’s good. Always best to be prepared. 🙂 *takes chocolate* Thank you.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
Oh wait @Ethryndal, the truce has been called already…oh well. 😛 Have some spare moral support.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal *whispers* Thank you. And now YOU need moral support too. *gives you it*
@Lady_Erin Oh-ho, whatever Les Mis thing you intend to watch, you need to read it for sure. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia Great!
@That_Writer_Girl_99 …Yeah.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia Oh, well that’s far from Australia. 😛 I’ve lived in Ohio most of my life, but born in Texas.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia Oh…whoops! Sorry about that; it was probably my fault not yours. I thought I remembered from a long time ago that you were. What are you?
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