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Fynn

“W-with a blue tie like Callista’s eyes, and a white dress shirt, this would look good,” Chase said, holding out a navy suit.

Fynn smiled. “You’ve noticed her eyes too?”

Chase suddenly looked really nervous and stuttered for something to say.

“Oh, no, I didn’t mean it in that way,” Fynn said, waving his hands back and forth in fron…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

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“Well, have you come up with a name?” Hugo asked, trying to figure out how he should hold onto  his elk.

“I’m thinking Ever,” Ottoline patted her Elk’s neck. “You should name yours Aero.”

“Aero?” He laughed. “That’s…just not for him. No…. I think-”

“Do you have any better ideas?” Ottoline challenged.

“No,…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I don’t know why that made me laugh, but I started cracking up and had to explain to my brothers what was so funny.

Haha! Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009 @everyone

Ive decided that Hugos elks name is actually going to be “Elkie” XD

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

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He tried to look cool on the elk and now Ottoline was asking him to name it.

“Why not something like…Willow? Or Ivy? Or Nimrod?” she smiled.

He pushed aside all her ideas and concentrated, “How about something like… I dunno… Elkie?”

“That has got to be the most idiotic name in the history of the world…[Read more]

@rae

They are!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

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“We seriously have to ride elk?” Hugo asked no one in particular, “Why not something cooler like a tiger or a horse?”
He noticed that Ottoline was standing by hers and not getting on.

“What are you waiting for?” He laughed. “It’s not gonna bite you…”

“I don’t see you on yours either,” She smirked, turning…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!

Thank you!!

@rae

Putting last names together! XD, my big brother did that when he found out who my crush was!This scene is sooooooooo sweet!

Thank you! My little brother does that to me also, lol XD

@savannah_grace2009

Everyone above gave such great advice that I dont really have much to add. I sometimes worry about things too, that my book is to dark and I worry that my style changes throughout the WIP. I also doubt myself, but I realized that I shouldn’t be, you are the only one who can tell the story you are telling. It may be hard to…[Read more]

@everyone

The scene above is a little old, but I felt like I had to finish off the last part that I forgot to do, so just continue with the journey were doing now 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry this is a little late! (Ignore all mistakes I’m writing this fast, lol! )

Hugo

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“I’m sorry,” Ottoline laughed a little, “All I do is cry,” she smiled wryly. Hugo smiled at her and held her hand tighter.

A man sat down next to Ottoline, “I don’t think we’ve met,” he addressed Hugo, sticking out his hand. “I’m Ma…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ive always used Google docs, sometimes they do get laggy but you just have to be a bit patient *Heres me over here pounding the keys and yelling at the computer while all my family is looking at me like I’m insane* XD  But doc works great! The one with my WIP on is currently 138 pages and it works just fine, Id say about 95% of the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I use Google for pretty much everything, so Docs is my go-to, especially since it’s easier to make files in my Drive. There was one time a couple years back I tried Word for like two minutes and then gave up. XD I don’t have much experience with it, so I can’t say whether I actually like it or not.

I use both the app and websi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!

@savannah_grace2009

The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )

@savannah_grace2009

 Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

Lol! Thank you!!

In this scene they are trying to break into a giant facility to save their family’s. Hugo being his annoying self, lol!

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“Now are you ready?” Hugo asked impatiently, testing the strength of the handcuffs.

She hesitated, “Yes, I think we are.”

“Kiss for motivation?”

“In your dreams Walton.”

She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.

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He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you t…[Read more]

Yeahhh, that happens somewhat often. It usually fixes itself within a few days (I think). There was only one time I can remember when it actually lasted for a few weeks.

@rae @calyhuge

or we could kill Fynn or Fynn could go on a trip or something

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I don’t know why I find that so funny. That’s like, not healthy. 😂

I don’t approve of him getting killed, but I also don’t mind a little drama between my charries. Fynn could have to leave or something before the dance, then comes back and finds out that Callist…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I wish I could help but I don’t normally name my chapters (I struggle enough with naming my projects. XD). But I think Rae had some good suggestions. 🙂