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Elizabeth Hearten replied to the topic Anybody have a name? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@euodia-vision what do you think of Kaius?
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Elizabeth Hearten replied to the topic Anybody have a name? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
My association with “Kalos” is a region in one of the Pokemon games, but it’s certainly a good name!
I’m a fan of the name Killian, personally (it’s German, if I recall), but that might seem like you were attempting a play on words, if he’s a bad guy, and it might not be quite as mysterious and “face of the power behind it…[Read more]
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Elizabeth Hearten replied to the topic Anybody have a name? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ooh, fascinating!
I definitely like the Septrum better as a universe name.
As for the individual planets, the first thing that came to mind for me was just “a Septre” (could be pronounced “Septra” or “Septer”, whichever!), if the universe name and the planet name should be connected like that.
I love the Hebrew language, and to…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Hahaha! I love your characters! They are just like real people! 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
What do you want to be when you grow up? Or if you’re already grown up, what did you want to be when you were young
Shauna: I’d love to be a nurse and help people out.
Jean: That would be the perfect job for you Shauna, you would do that so well!
Shauna: (smiles) What you be Jean?
Jean: A mom!
Shauna: That would be great! How m…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Jonathan… XD
Oooh, ok! I’ll have my charries answer number 1.
What would you do if you found a $100 bill?
Ami: …Ev: …
Finally,
Ev: What’s a dollar bill?
Ami: *shrugs* Maybe it’s a type of currency…
Me: One Aletheian drek is equal to two American dollars.
Ev: Oh, ok. So 100 dollars is 50 dreks! Sweet! After exchang…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow. That was super fun/scary to read! Is there a second book? I mean, there’s got to be more! 🙂
I’m glad you enjoyed it!! There is of course more!! 😀 As of now, it is only existent in my head though… XD When I start writing, I’ll post it!
I really like how you described the aunt and uncle. I could totally picture the cottage.
Yay!! ᾗ…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I Have Returned in the forum Announcements 3 years, 9 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassian
I am the #1 Wingfeather Saga hater. Anyone who disagrees with me will be mysteriously assassinated within the next couple of days (not on the weekends tho)
*horrified gasp* SAY WHAT NOW?!?!
*clears throat*
I have read your post about WFS when I stalked the forum and I can only agree on bits of it. The first book…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizewritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6
Here are the last three chapters!!! (Sorry it took me so long. I kept forgetting. XD) It’s pretty fast-paced, in my opinion. So don’t mind that. I may fix it in the second draft.
I do not have a chapter of Asher and Ev’s conversation. It may be in the secon…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yes, it is his first name. And in most situations, no, it is not really acceptable, but Hans allows Erich to do it, whereas he won’t let Riker call him by his first name in almost all circumstances.
I think it being acceptable is more based off of the officer than the exact rules, if you understand what I mean. 😅
Ok, that makes s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @sarafini @felicity @mineralizedwritings @loopyli @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Sorry, y’all! I don’t think I can keep up with this RP as well. 🙁 Hope y’all have fun!! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Gotcha. You’re good! 😉
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Allison replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
That’s going to take a while for me to answer, I don’t have enough characters yet 😀
Also everyone- I looked up some questions and found some great ones like…..
#1- What would your character do if they found a $100 bill on the ground?
#2-What would your character’s dream home look like and where would it be?
#3- What do they l…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh that’s fine! Lol, I’m sorry! I forgot to put a name XD. Ooh, I like that name. My nickname is Nat, you could call me that or Alina :).
It’s all good. 🙂
Alright! 👍
@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper
I have to hop off now, but it was still fun doing a couple RPs!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
That was a great start to a book!! I really enjoyed it! Definitely intrigued!
Just a few nit-picky things though.
I noticed that Erich addressed his superior by his first name. (Or last. I’m not sure) Is he allowed to do that? Obviously, I don’t know, but you would, since you’ve researched. I was just wonde…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
I watch Len’s every move. I will not let him ruin our explorations in the glorious depths of this library.
Behind us, a girl walks up, introducing herself as Elizabeth. I smile, waving slightly and introduce myself. “And this is Alina and Whalekeeper.”
( @lightoverdarkness I just looke…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Sorry that took so long!
Oops, I didn’t see you had written a RP. 😅
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yep!!
I’m going to go ahead and write the first RP continuing where we left off while we wait for the others. I’m also gonna throw in a villain right now before things get too slow.
“So… y’all want explore this place?” I ask.
Everyone heartily agrees. I lead the way through the rows of bookshelves and down a staircase.…[Read more]
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