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Allison replied to the topic Hi everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
Its pronounced cello, just normal can and ending, sounding like Sello (if that makes scene 😀 ) No I haven’t published anything yet, haven’t finished anything either but I hope to someday! I feel the exact same way about sports, I am not good at organized sports but when we make them up with our own rules, wellll 😀 😀 😀
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
A fellow pantser!!! XD
Yeah, I write cliffhangers a lot, but also I can’t stop reading when I get to a cliffhanger, so… I’ll have to try that series again lol.
I’m working on Chapter 8, and have been for a few days but I’ve been kind of stuck at the ending. So you know, I’ll probably have it done at some point XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Okay, when I first read that paragraph about Malyk dying, I thought you mean EVERTON was going to die, and I was really sad because I love what I’ve read about him…. (totally not stalking him or anything, lol)
But you didn’t, so we’re good. 😅😁
Aaaanyway, yes, I totally get it. I struggled with killing off any of my charries for a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Idk who to tag so… here we go!
I have a question concerning my trilogy. This is also concerning plot twists/character deaths, so read at your own risk!!
*ahem*
Alrighty. Now for the actually problem.
In my whole trilogy, only one important character dies…
I feel like I need more characters to die.
😅
Now I know that sounds like I may be try…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Awesome! Well I guess he already has something a little different about him, then, so that worked out! 😁
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Eclipse
Azar was itching to follow after Ridley. Eclipse could feel it. At least that would get us away from everyone else, he thought.
Azar let out a nearly imperceptible sigh, glancing around. But then we’d miss all the fun here, he replied. Honestly, there are too many decisions.
Maybe it’d be easier if you…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic so I'm publishing a novelette… in the forum Publishing & Platform 3 years, 4 months ago
*gasp*
You’re publishing a novella???
CONGRATULATIONS!!! 🥳
I definitely have to check it out!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic Hi everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
I have arrived! *swooshes cape*
Welcome to Kingdom Pen @hybridlore!!
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!!
(Whew, that was a lot. 😮💨😂)
So cool that you play the violin too!! I suppose that brings me to the questions!
1. How long have you played violin?
2. W…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@freedom
Arrgh, I know! I had to do this same thing a while back, and grr it’s so frustrating because sometimes it just has to be done… I mean, tropes became tropes because everyone thought they were a good idea, sooo…. There must be something there, right? XD
Anyway, I’ve got a few random thoughts (this might not be helpful because I have…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
XD XD I’m such a pantser I don’t even know when I’ll have cliffhangers or not. I mean, I planned out chapters 1 and 2, and then just went of the rails and the chapters have been ending that way, lol. Hey, but at least it keeps you reading 🤣
I read a random one of the Keeper of the Lost Cities books a loooong time ago because I got it…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Oh, and yes I’m nearly done with the next chapter. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, I’m definitely looking for critiques! My first drafts especially need it XD
The scene on top of the ship may have been a little muddled because it was the first time I was actually figuring out what the top of the ship was going to look like instead of what I was actually writing. XD I do that a lot. Anyway, yeah, I’ll d…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
WOW! Thats does sound amazing!! I will definitely read that one! Thanks for sharing 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Hi everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
Welcome! I’m Acancello! I’m also home schooled! I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😀 ! I’m so glad you could come to KP! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions 🙂
Whats your favorite book series?
Do you like to do any crafting or sports?…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
@keilah-h @landric @thearcaneaxiom @gwyndalf-the-wise @hybridlore
Alright, here’s chapter… 7? Lol. Yeah it is. Feels longer cause they’re all so long… XD
Chapter 7
As morning comes to our side of Aavian, I sit out on the wing of the ship while rain pours down. Dark clouds loom overhead, sending branching lightning down to grasp for the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I think it would be perfectly fine! I mean, like you said, it’s your book. On top of that, I’ve read plenty of books that change up creatures from mythology, or the events that happened in their legends. I doubt you’d get a whole lot of people complaining about the difference being inaccurate either way.
For example, Sirens have…[Read more]
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