Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

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Thanks! And it’s smudged, it just doesn’t show up in the pic for some reason 🤣

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Thanks!

@kyronthearcanin Cool!! Do you have pictures or something of what each planet looks like? Or a description? I’d love to see pictures of each sentient species, too, if you have them. (If you don’t that’s ok!)

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Write as much as youd like! I LOVE both of your posts on here!

This is Arwen! My MC for my current WIP that I was telling some of you about. This drawing is still being finished, my aunt drew it and then I modified it to how I picture Arwen.

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I think articles that are written far too often are those about writer’s block and how to outline a story. It seems like everyone’s written one on those topics. Personally, I would love to see articles on worldbuilding and writing romance.

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Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

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I’ve been thinking about writing an article as well. I don’t know what topic you could do, but I’ve been told that it’s a good idea to do something that you’re passionate about and that you know well.

I asked @kathleenramm about writing an article a little while ago. She should be able to give you some pointers. I know that @kyronthearcanin

Anytime!😅

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Love it! I don’t have any major points or criticisms for this one, though I will ask why your calling it a galaxy and not a solar system?

@kyronthearcanin Awesome job! Are all of the planets in the same orbit, more or less, or are they increasing distances from Blasyx?

@kyronthearcanin Of course, of course! I’m kinda at that stage with worldbuilding on a story I started like a year ago and still haven’t even started writing.

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Cool idea!!

I’ll have to hop on here later and post something. 😀

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I recently had to do a string-along story in school. Basically, the title is one word, then from there the sentences grow in length.

I just did one too!! Mine was so much shorter. XD It’s impressive that you made it that long! Great job!! 😄

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Thanks! 🙂

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Of course, sorry if I come off as a know it all when I point anything out. My own worldbuilding is also very incomplete, and I agree on the list thing. Maybe I should start posting some chapters of my WIP sometime, though it gets a little creepy at parts, but it would be nice to have a nice set of critiques as well.

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That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]

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Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome!