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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
Sorry, I messed up everyone’s names 🙂
I really like “In too deep” but we can think of more if you want 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
I really dont know how it should go yet 😀 But heres the whole story together. It might help anyone create another piece 🙂 What should we call it? Or should we wait till its finished. We can start thinking of names now!
One bright sunny day, I watched a gir…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin You may definitely have a point there XD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
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Starshiness replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
@freedomwriter76 Lollll
@kyronthearcanin HAHAH FRRR that exact face says it all 😭
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Faith replied to the topic Critiques On My Fantasy World? in the forum Fantasy 3 years ago
Thanks! I’ll look into those videos, I appreciate the suggestion. 🙂
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Faith replied to the topic Critiques On My Fantasy World? in the forum Fantasy 3 years ago
Thank you for pointing that out! Geography is definitely not one of my strong suits XD (hence asking for critiques lol) I’ll take note of that and make sure to redraw it later.
Lol, the my sister inspired the O’Snapp Canyon. It was named after the first words that came out of a famous explorers’ mouth when he discovered the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
It’s so much harder to RP with multiple people – totally a learning curve. I’m used to one-on-one RPs. You’ll be an expert after this XD
Yeah, probably because real people are so much more complicated. Fictionalizing yourself is like trying to draw something without reference. You’re not used to seeing yourself from the outside.
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whaley replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I feel you there XD These things can get soo long… but are definitely entertaining.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Makes sense to me, names are hard🤣
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Very interesting! Is Kyrah different from Kirah?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
Rampart
His eyes blinked open.
Darkness…… and not an Imperial facility.
The two glow-scales on his temples brightened to give him some more light.
The structure didn’t seem to be made by any dragon, in fact. Many of the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks! The webbing on his hands is because he’s a sea dragon, so it helps him swim better.
@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 Also there’s one detail I forgot about him. On the end of his tail, he tied a needle-sharp horn from a narwhal-like creature as a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Alright. 🙂
Derek
“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”
Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.
“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 3 years ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Hi! Im not going to be on KP to much this week. We are driving cross country and getting to our stops pretty late. Ill be on as often as I can, but it might take me a while to reply! -
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Looking good! I don’t think your alluding to the idea of Brycen being one of the chosen here, other than the fact that the the story is told from the perspective of the other two chosen. And using the description of draconic for Tali would further increase suspicions that she’s the dragonborn, that being now two implied…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 All righty, that’s three votes for the “paranoid dragon”…..so let’s meet him! I won’t be able to RP as him yet, but I’ll try for tomorrow.
Name: Admiral Rampart (first name unknown)
Appearance and traits: A dark green and…[Read more]
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I’m a fan of the paranoid dragon
Everyone else:
Your characters are awesome!
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone else on here.
Okay, here’s my insane anti-hero
Name: Violet Maxwell
Occupation: thief/break-in expert
Looks: Brunette hair,…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Oooo, great cliffhanger! I’m excited for more
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Haha, lol! Yeah, It makes sense that Amara would be the dragonborn because of Jade, but it seemed very likely that you were alluding to Tali, because only dragons were seen, then suddenly a human, thus, that human must be draconic in some way. I think I would personally prefer the latter if I was writing this, but I think it…[Read more]
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Alrighty! Have fun! 🙂
Alright! 🙂 Hope you have fun!! 😀
Enjoy your trip!
How was your trip?
Hi! I’m soooooooo sorry that it took me so long to respond. We have no internet at our new house and we are getting it in a bit longer than a week. KP doesn’t work very well on my phone at all, so I’ll try to be on in a week! I miss you all!