@kyronthearcanin
Active 6 days, 5 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 718
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
ALRIGHT MY PEOPLES!!! I will now begin telling u about my characters, in depth, and answering any questions u may have about them!
BTW! (This would make my life, and yours since I don’t want to be tagging every time so u may not get tagged) a whole lot easier!) If u push Notify Me of Follow-Up Replies Via Email, below, then you’ll be notified…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 started the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok the title might sound a bit weird but I wanted an interesting name XD
Basically this forum is for all things MY SERIES!! That sounds a bit uhh prideful but yea XD
so! First things first, not to be…idk whatever XD, but I would like to keep this forum close to topic, tho I don’t mind talking about y’all’s stuff and how it relates to my seri…[Read more]
-
Starshiness replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Now for the board! I’ve never actually made one of these so idk how good it is 🫣
Oh and some tags
@freedomwriter76 @esther-c @awsumfaith @janellebelovedpig @acancello @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @landric @anyone-else
-
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Sounds good to me👍😅🤣
Thanks! Hmm, I could color it to look more floral🤔
Thank you! Yeah, a lot of people are saying water related things, waves, sharks, stingray, I could maybe try changing it to increase that vibe, it might also work as coral. Excellent question, believe it or not, with a…[Read more]
-
Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin
@elanor @felicity @starshiness @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-inHere’s the next part!
The days seemed lighter after that. The guilty burden of hiding the letter was gone, now what lingered was just grieving her best friend. Little One didn’t often journey out to her garden anymore or…[Read more]
-
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
That looks really cool!! 😄
Whatever it is… 😂 Maybe it’s a flower??? Idk. XD
Thanks! It could be a flower of some kind😂
Someone else told me it looks like shark teeth, not the first thing that came to my mind🤣
Hmmm it reminds be of a blurred s. Or chain links, vaguely. Or a braid.
Yeah, I was…[Read more]
-
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@otherworldlyhistorian @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @mineralizedwritings @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else
Happy Easter y’all!!! I just made this random thing, not sure what it is, but it looks cool, what do y’all think?
-
Starshiness replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@landric Oh goodness I love this so much. I can totally see the story and the whole aesthetic come to life!! Totally didn’t see the spy twist coming but it was superb. Gosh no, don’t you dare scrap this story, I want to see more! However, I do agree with @kyronthearcanin I think separate stories is the way to go. Who knows, you might be able to…[Read more]
-
LandriC replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@gwyndalf-the-wise and @kyronthearcanin
I’m so glad you guys like it!! *curtsies* Again, it’s an old piece and I wasn’t sure if I should just scrap it. Thanks for finding those grammatical errors!
Here’s the deal…I do have another part. I was planning on having both Will and Emma flashback to show their really different home lives and their…[Read more]
-
LandriC replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Yes, it was great!! Thanks so much for posting it and allowing me to read it.
-
Esther started the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Happy Easter, everyone!!! 🐰🐣✝️🌷
Praise the Lord our Savior is alive!!! 🥳 He rose from the grave, for death could not hold Him down. Hallelujah!! ✨
Hope you all have a blessed Easter! 🥰🥰
“And he said to them, “Do not be alarmed. You seek Jesus of Nazareth, who was crucified. He has risen; he is not here. See the place where they laid him…[Read more]
-
Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
OOO I love those character designs, especially Quelin’s XD
-
Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m sorry guys, I’ve been kinda busy lately. I’ll try to rp on Monday or some day after that, but you can skip my turn if I’m ever taking too long.
Oh, and happy Easter!
-
LandriC replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Great job on Chapter 3!! It had good follow-up from Chapter 2 and might just be my favorite chapter yet. All of you herbalism/healing techniques are spot on, and the descriptions of the ship really added to the cool sci-fi vibes. I could picture everything easily. Keep up the good work! Your charries are so likable and fun. Great…[Read more]
-
LandriC started the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @freedomwriter76 @acancello @gwyndalf-the-wise @anyone
Hi guys!
This is a really old short story of mine. I’ve decided not to turn it into a novel, but I’d still like to hone it and fix it up. Edits/opinions/ideas are appreciated!!The ballroom was a sea of bobbing and floating colors. Even the oppressive Alabama hea…[Read more]
-
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Sorry I took so long to respond to this.
So at this point you’ve basically displayed plainly that she’s the shifter. Though you said that she was shifting reality, but it looks more like it’s only illusionary magic, convincing one individual at a time of what reality is, without that actually being reality. Perhaps that is only…[Read more]
-
Felicity replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Argggh!! I hate that when I’m reading a book, but I used to do it a lot in my own writing. One time it was this random drink that I had made up, and I thought it was sooo neat!!! (it was, if I do say so myself, but the reader could care less.)
Exactly. Exactly. Exactly!!! That happened to me just this morning actually.
-
Felicity replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok, makes sense now. 🙂
-
Felicity replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I just caught up on the parts you posted since I was on here last!
When did Brycen hit Tali? I was a bit confused there, but really interested in seeing where you’re going with this Atticus guy. 😉
-
LandriC replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you so much for the pictures!! Your art is great, and I love getting to see the characters in my mind now! I’ve been slammed with school but am planning to read Chapter 3 tonight!
Not me having KP tag emails sitting in my inbox for weeks while I slave through anatomy classes 🙂 - Load More