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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Oh wait, can you even edit? 🤦♀️
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Huh. I don’t know how I could fix that.
I could open a section of it specifically for comments, and y’all could write them out instead of linking them to a specific section of text, but I feel like that might be more annoying for other people. Maybe I can copy any major ones over for you.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Pretty please, with a cherry on top, tell me what happens to Joseph and his family. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Nice.
@ducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint
New chapters are out. I wrote this week, so I feel like I have enough room to give you guys two.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
It might have just been something I thought, then. Not that I was saying it was totally unrealistic—I just know that last-minute conversions tend to be less … I don’t know.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.
The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
😢😢😢
Okay, I see where you’re coming from.
True, maybe… but maybe he’s done enough research to have found it already. I don’t know. I wanted to hear something about Joseph’s descendants, but it’s okay.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Either way, honestly. Whatever works.
I think it might still let you in, but I don’t know if you’ll be able to comment. I guess we’ll have to see. I’ll email you the link.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Wow.
I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.
Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.
I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle That makes sense.
I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
It’s okay. Sorry I keep nagging you, but… I feel justified. I’ve had to wait on that ending for about five days.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
yeah, well that’s reality for ya.
is it really though??
(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)
yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.
I think…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
bruh is this roleplay thing still on?
or did it die too?
if it is still there and still accepting characters, I had an absolute blast with Snake when he was in the character party roleplay and would love to dust him off.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.
I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Are we getting a new section today?
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