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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle lol
I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
What do your brothers love so much about it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
all right, time to answer the questions:
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I think your protagonists were the best.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
That was a short chapter, but pretty good!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.
~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.
🥺
Thank you!
Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
*reads over questions briefly*
Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝
I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.
Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.
Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Huntress
Felicity awkwardly took Sniper’s handshake before looking around at the maze. “We need to get out of here.”
“You can fly, right?” she addressed Soldier. “Could you maybe scout out a place we could take shelter for the night?”
He nodded and gave a salute before taking off, his powerful wings causing vortexes to appear in t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Word.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
We were able to get it to work, thankfully! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I tried to send them to your emails. So for you, it’s the Proton one.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint
Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.
Hopefully this works.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
@jonas cool! I’d join.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Yes, I was going to say, I can probably switch them over to Word. I believe you can comment anonymously on there if you aren’t signed in. Just give me a couple minutes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle ^I second this.
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