Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@ellette-giselle

Yay! KP is back!

Good chapters. They made it out of there pretty easily. I thought that was going to be tough…

@ellette-giselle I really gotta get caught up, the past few days I haven’t been able to read them (been using my allotment of screen time for other things)

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re just going to leave us on that?? 🥺

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Those were good.

@ellette-giselle

I’m scared for them…

@ellette-giselle

Ellette!! What are you going to do to them!? 😳

@ellette-giselle

Oh boy…

Those were great. Didn’t really see anything that needed to be fixed. I like how we get to see both sides of it now.

@savannah_grace2009 yessss it’s been so long, I was recently thinking about ya! I’ve been doing well!

And that’s cool with me, whenever you start up on the story again I’ll be there!

@whalekeeper to be fair I don’t know how I did it either.

i think I honestly just pushed my characters into a plot together and said “you two are gonna like each other by the end of it, trust me.”

@rae @grcr @esther

Praying for these things! Hoping everything goes well and any emotional struggles will be comforted.

I don’t know how some of you people write romance novels. I have a new respect for y’all, because this is exhausting. Not bad, just exhausting.

@grcr

That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.

Hey, I’m open if you ever wanna talk characters. And worldbuilding too, if you’d like.

@linus-smallprint

I am also sorry if my previous comment came off as pushy. I was not frustrated at you at all, I was more curious than anything, and I really wanted to clarify what the conversation was about.

@linus-smallprint

If you want to discuss the actual morality of rebellion, I am open to do so. I am curious to know why some Christians believe it is okay to rebel and overthrow governments.

But yeah, maybe it is best if I talk to someone older. I will see what Douglas Bond says in his books.

That was where I thought the conversation was going,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ah, that makes sense. The problem of which country would have legal authority was the part that stumped me, and I figured Canada, which leads to nothing because I know nothing about Canada.

@ellette-giselle

What do you think of it as? The meaning?

I don’t know. It’s a cute name to me. 😂