Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@whalekeeper ^^

@loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009

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@ellette-giselle

So now you stole a gun from me?

Well, it’s my world, so it’s my gun. And since I’m its author, I say it’s out of bullets. 😝

*makes another attempt to steal Leon and Rolf from you*

Okay. I feel like that wasn’t really clear . . . but then again, we did get a warning that the next town would be dark, so I guess that was it. I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?

@ellette-giselle

What… who gave you a gun, anyway? This is a medieval world. The best you should have is a sword.

@ellette-giselle

*inches closer to Leon and Rolf while you’re distracted*

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep!

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True, but it’s not like, direct. Idk.

@ellette-giselle

Wouldn’t their deaths right now be kind of disappointing? They wouldn’t even die for their faith or anything. . . just . . . a grudge. For abolishing the slave trade.

@ellette-giselle

Yes… no… yes…

If you seriously kill them… 😫

@ellette-giselle

Wyoh strikes again 😣 I didn’t get tagged.

It was a necessary act of terrorism.

But… now how are we going to save Leon and Rolf? 😢😢

@liberty

I already attempted to do so and got out-debated. She took fake-Alec. 😖

You don’t care about Leon?

@liberty *whispers* I think we’re just encouraging her. . . 👀😟

@liberty

Ohh… that sounds painful. How did the cow hit you?

@ellette-giselle

… touché.

*wants to ask for another section, but is also concerned of what I might find in it*

@ellette-giselle

I seem to recall it was you who invited me here. 🧐 XD

Poor fake Alec. At least fake Leon and Rolf get their freedom. 🤣