Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@ellette-giselle That’s what I thought, it sounds like a girl’s name.

also that meme is peak humor lol

@ellette-giselle

Haha! I like Aelic too, but I really liked how you put us more in Julian’s mind than we normally get to be.

I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.

@linus-smallprint

completely off topic but Bastille is an awesome name for a character. It sounds like a female name, but I guess it could be for a guy too.

@ellette-giselle

Love this section! You did a great job of bringing in Julian’s character and his thoughts, like when he remembered the burning building. Their last exchange is so funny. XD

The fireman’s carry imo is harder than piggyback. I don’t care what they say.

You know story research just got real when you’re contemplating carrying your sister as many times up and down the street as you can, to test the strength vs weight in an escape scene

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

New chapters on the Part 2 doc!

Stopped at :45. That was legitimately helpful

This is going to sound goofy, but I’m going to start an idea-generation session at :05.

@ellette-giselle great job on this section!!

@ellette-giselle

I feel like they’re not going to be happy. Particularly with Aelic.

@ellette-giselle

I’m worried for Aelic…

@ellette-giselle

Ahh! I love it! I’m glad they decided to go back to the village, but… 😬

@thearcaneaxiom I know you’re not here much but……

Remember this conversation?

Me:  I can’t believe I’m doing this.

I’m asking you an Avatar The Last Airbender question.

I remember you were telling me to watch the show like your life depended on it years ago. Still like it?

You:

-Me being chronically inactive cause I’m about to serve a…

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Done at :55

Well now I have a headache and a sad scene on my hands. Tsk, tsk. Must move on to something cheerful.

Popping on to work for a while, starting at :15. I have a headache from sickness recovery, but hopefully I can write without having to look at the screen of my computer.

@linus-smallprint

Thanks, dude! I’m using a classical painting for color reference and it’s going surprisingly well. (In a simplified kind of way.)

@elishavet-pidyon ohhhh! That makes sense.