Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.

~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.

🥺

Thank you!

Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]

*reads over questions briefly*

Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝

I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.

Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.

Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?

@loopylin

Huntress

Felicity awkwardly took Sniper’s handshake before looking around at the maze. “We need to get out of here.”

“You can fly, right?” she addressed Soldier.  “Could you maybe scout out a place we could take shelter for the night?”

He nodded and gave a salute before taking off, his powerful wings causing vortexes to appear in t…[Read more]

@theducktator

Word.

@theducktator

We were able to get it to work, thankfully! 😅

@ellette-giselle

I tried to send them to your emails. So for you, it’s the Proton one.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.

Hopefully this works.

@jonas cool! I’d join.

@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!