Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@savannah_grace2009

You’re doing great Sara 🥰 You are brave to try counseling even though it sounds potentially scary and sensitive.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this…[Read more]

…@savannah_grace2009

Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.

About the Pythonos’ redeemability:

I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…

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@theshadow ok so actually I was reading over my writing again and I realized that while you were off in saying Engineer’s line was from when their team lost and he wanted to know why, there actually is a scene very close to that in the story! He’s trying to boost morale for his team after they get beaten soundly, although Huntress is the only one…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I know right? Ugh.

I’m glad it seems to be working for you now though

@mineralizedwritings haha that’s a cute style for him! He looks great!

@ellette-giselle I have no idea. Maybe just go into your settings and see if you accidentally hit something or if a glitch turned off the notifications.

@linus-smallprint ooh, more trivia!

@theducktator

I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉

Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
Yep! Sorry, my post was a little late, lol

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, he looks so cool!!

Ugh I posted something long and it didn’t work XD

Min has way more experience with dystopia, so listen to her. But I’m working on a dreampunk/fantasy dystopia, so I have a feeling for the genre.

Dystopias are all about taking a philosophy or point of worry in the modern day, and running with it as far as you can in a hypothetical scenario. It’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️

You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?

You shouldn’t even be alive.

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Don’t tell anyone…they…

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@mineralizedwritings

Farimiiiiiiirrrrrr

@theshadow You were close

• You got Spy’s perfectly correct. I’m actually astonished.
• Heavy’s was correct too, but I suppose if you know the characters, it’s kinda easy.
• Soldier’s is also very close in the “being delusional” part.
• Scout was definitely showing off, but he wasn’t killing anyone quite yet. It was when they’d first got hired,…

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@ellette-giselle whoaaa

I love that drawing! It looks like it could be the cover of a book!

@theducktator

Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!

@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009

Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️

@ellette-giselle

I like the focus on gesture! It’s good that you’re not afraid to draw action. I have a hard time with that sometimes.