Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@theducktator lol you’re welcome!!

@evelyn-collins blahhh messed up your tag

@theducktator From what I remember it’s the neck (Jugular vein and carotid artery) or thigh (Femoral veins)

Both will cause the victim to bleed out, if  that’s what you’re intending. Anywhere else will just cause them pain. Of course, you could always aim for the eye if you want to hurt them severely but not have a near-100% kill…[Read more]

@eveln-collins yay you’re back!!

and haha, forget timelines this is fanfic we’re talking about! I saw you were rewriting it.

The next part’s pretty good so far. Maybe have her lead the droid into one of the actual cells and just lock it in there so it can’t sound the alarm? she could say something like “wait a minute I think it was the door to…[Read more]

@rae LOL that’s happened to me. My brother has a male character named Eirwen (who I named), and I learned shortly after naming him that’s a female name, but it’s exotic enough that I suppose not a lot of people will notice.

@ellette-giselle haha yeah…

it’s useful for story writing though

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper whoaaaa I didn’t mean to start a HP fight in the replies, I was just stating why I personally don’t trust it. I don’t think any of you are like, evil or anything for reading it.

but I would agree with what whaley says on the “Are the books basing off real magic, or are they just fantasy with cool…[Read more]

@rae

RAE!!! I caaaaaaaan’t share this!! Secrets keep me going! Plus it wouldn’t read understandably without context. Nevertheless, thank you for the support LOL XDXD

I started a new short story about Tomoko Tadashi Tama (I think that’s what his full name is gonna be, still on fence) but I just discovered that the name Tomoko is supposed to be a g…

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@freed_and_redeemed

And it being an unconventional one is the best 😜

Exactly! 🤪 Thx for responding to my little ramble 😚

Honestly prob gonna take a short break from editing bc as much as I love them, I need a break from Leon and Riker XD

and idk it’s a little more difficult when editing, bc I’m reading over things I’ve already written and rewri…

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@mineralizedwritings

Making something unique yet consistent is really important to me. But so hard to pull off XD

I like having two different ones to rotate between, it keeps me from getting bored lol. Thanks! I’m glad you’re interested in it. Honestly for so long ATOH was like my special project but now I’m not sure which one means more to me.

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To be clear, I’m not attacking Keilah, I’m just generally defending the use of magic in these generally avoided series.

A fantasy book telling the reader not to read fantasy books would be hypocritical.

I think a lot of this can be simplified through common sense. Were these books meant to be imitated? Were they portraying real sorcery positively, or just using for an obviously fantastical story? If Alan (or even better, his parents, since he was young and easily…[Read more]

@theducktator haha you’re welcome!!

@linus-smallprint For me, it would depend on what the books have in them. Do they just have characters with cool powers, or are there actual magic spells being used in them, even if those particular spells are fake?

A good example is Star Wars compared to Harry Potter. Both have magic systems I’ve seen Christians complain a lot about. This is my…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint ahh cool! I’m glad that you took notice of my noticing. LOL.

@theducktator she sounds awesome lol

@keilah-h

Yeah, thanks!! I hope it stands up to my claims when I write it! 😝

@mineralizedwritings

Really?? That’s so cool! I can’t imagine how that must feel.

It’s a weird feeling, but it’s not distracting me from the rest of the project. I know a lot of people have their ending planned out, but get over-obsessed and never plan how to get there XDXD But this ending literally depends on how the rest of the story plays o…[Read more]

@whalekeeper oooh that’s awesome!! also cool that it’s an unconventional one.

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @freed_and_redeemed @anyone

I am so happy right now guys 👀 I found the perfect ending to my project. Like, I just can’t right now. And I won’t say what it is because the joy is in the foreshadowed surprise, but aagh – and it came from my plot board!! All I had to do was look at what was s…[Read more]