Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator

New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

@ellette-giselle

Oh yeah. Pretty crazy.

Okay, I gotcha. Maybe rewording it would make the sentence more clear?

“I need to take my boots off,” Julian moaned. “But I can’t get up.”

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That was a great speech!

I like the section. Didn’t really see much except for this, which was confusing…

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

But yeah, great job overall! Things are really getting interesting!

@theshadow

Hm, tags seem to be working kind of weird. Our names are not in blue, but I still got an email. 🤔

Absolutely! That seems like it would work great. Let me know when you send out the link!

@theshadow nah mate, you’re fine

(yep I’m leaning fully into it now)

thanks!

@linus-smallprint

XD No worries. Seems like it worked pretty well!

@the_lost-journal yep! And then share your stories with people and ask them what they thought and if there’s anything they think can change. You don’t have to follow their suggestions if you think it’ll conflict with the story, but if several people are all giving you the same or similar feedback, it’s a good idea to at least check out why.

@ellette-giselle

*shakes head at you*

Oh yeah, emperor, not king.

Uh oh… poor Dietrich.

@ellette-giselle

Still sad. 🥺

For now.

Yeah, yeah, yeah.

Probably. I don’t know what the king (and everyone else at the palace) is going to do once they hear of this… 😬

@ellette-giselle

Second favorite. Julian’s first. 😉 (Ian was up there too, but you got rid of him… 😢)

I wasn’t sure… I thought he was going to get a lashing. Again.

@ellette-giselle

Ooh boy. This was a powerful section. Good job.

But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

Nothing would ever be the same.

Dun dun dun……. 🫣

I read today’s. Gonna have to go back for Saturday’s.

sometimes I miss a chapter if I see it, mark it as important, but then it gets buried in my other emails.

@ellette-giselle oooooh

things are REALLY heating up now!

@rae that’s cute! I think it’s a funny idea.

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Praying!! <33

listen everyone I’m so sorry for diverting this topic from “contemporary writing” to “Shadow has decided Keilah sounds like Sniper now and there’s nothing any of them can do about it.” It’s 10:20 at night right now, I’m sitting in the car on my way home from a day trip, and I have only a fraction of an idea what I’m doing with my life.

@theshadow

I got my eye on ya, mate.

look what you’ve done you’ve encouraged my obsession lollllllll

@theducktator

Praying!! 🙏

Sounds good! I vote A 🙂

@rae

B would be fun!