Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I sympathized with him. Poor guy.

Yeah, I emailed you. 😅

@ellette-giselle

So does everyone else at the base know… you know.

@ellette-giselle

I love Michael. His explanation was believable and so sweet. 😢

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

How can anything go b…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@ellette-giselle

I have read them. 🙂 I’ve just been gone at a friend’s for the past couple days and haven’t given myself time to respond.

I want to rant about theremins. >:3

A theremin is an electric instrument invented accidentally in the 1920s. It is played without any physical contact by the performer. Two antennas create electromagnetic fields, and the performer waves their hand around the antennas to manipulate pitch and volume.

Finding a theremin is hard because there…[Read more]

I’m reawakening this topic because I’m putting together a list of magic system questions for myself. (Felt like updating my world bible.) They will be posted here when I’m done!

@theshadow

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

HAHAHA

one of them was likely stolen from Scout.

@theshadow

Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))

I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!

@ellette-giselle ok thanks!

@ellette-giselle I was just about to tell you I haven’t caught up in a while. Which chapter was the last one I commented on? I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow.

@ellette-giselle thank you!!

I always try to ask before doing that kind of thing these days.

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome. Mind if I take the meme to post on my youtube channel on the 4th? They might find it funny.

@ellette-giselle PEAK MEME LOLLLLLLL

I love that.

now, to prevent Soldier from deciding the cookies are for him and eating them all (and getting sick afterward)

@theducktator

Oh no. Praying!!

@rae

You’re not alone when it comes to getting easily distracted.

Should I write Farewell in first person?

Hmmm, can’t say. It seemed straightforward enough in third person from what I remember.

I finished all the short stories, but I didn’t give you feedback for all of them I’m afraid. 😅

Also on the first person thing, it might work, but it also might throw everyone off, y’know? It really depends.

@rae

I think his passion is what made him the best fantasy author. If Tolkien didn’t love writing, and didn’t love the story, then it wouldn’t have been a classic. It wouldn’t have been published at all.

That’s exactly what I’m saying. He wrote great stories because he loved writing so much, not because his ability was somehow greater than other writers.

@rae

I’m one of those perfectionists who wants to throw their stuff in the trash everytime they read it just cuz it isn’t as good as Lord of the Rings

I know you’re joking, but has nobody thought about the fact that it must’ve either taken Tolkien like 5 drafts to get it perfect, or he was just the exception to the rule and had everything str…[Read more]