@kyronthearcanin
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
I like the idea! Do you have any specific questions on the arc back to God?
As for the length, I’d say this idea is a little too much for a short story, though it probably could be pulled off. I’d say the best idea would be, if you are looking for an option besides a novel, a novella. It would be a great theme and arc for that length.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay this actually sounds really cool! 😁 I love brainstormin XD.
Offering money would be along the right lines for motivation, since she’s taking care of Luca. Depending on how closely she knows the coworker, there are a few different ways you could take this. If they’ve never talked, and he seems nice, she could not exactly trust him, but at…[Read more]-
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Thanks!! 😁 I really appreciate you taking the time to write all that out too ❤️❤️
Yeah, so I was thinking she’ll probably know him, but not super well. So at first she’s like, of course not! But then, exactly! she needs money for her and her brother, and she agrees to help them.
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Also, one of the other things I was unsure about is the length? I really wanted to finish an entire novel, and I was set on this idea, but I feel like if I don’t have an ending I’m excited for I’ll just… stop xD
So I was wondering if maybe I should just try to aim for a novella or short story type thing? You had a lot of great ideas for the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
To “hear” XD don’t know what was going through my head there 🤣
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Yeah!! Thanks ❤️
So, my idea was kind of that Ania (yeah I’m calling her that now xD) gets asked by her coworker to join them, and they’re the ones who are pulling off some sort of heist. I’m assuming right now that they’re trying to kill a government leader, but I could change it later, depending on how it goes 😉 She at first…[Read more]-
Okay this actually sounds really cool! 😁 I love brainstormin XD.
Offering money would be along the right lines for motivation, since she’s taking care of Luca. Depending on how closely she knows the coworker, there are a few different ways you could take this. If they’ve never talked, and he seems nice, she could not exactly trust him, but at…[Read more]-
@kyronthearcanin
Thanks!! 😁 I really appreciate you taking the time to write all that out too ❤️❤️
Yeah, so I was thinking she’ll probably know him, but not super well. So at first she’s like, of course not! But then, exactly! she needs money for her and her brother, and she agrees to help them.
Then I was kind of just thinking that either her…[Read more] -
Also, one of the other things I was unsure about is the length? I really wanted to finish an entire novel, and I was set on this idea, but I feel like if I don’t have an ending I’m excited for I’ll just… stop xD
So I was wondering if maybe I should just try to aim for a novella or short story type thing? You had a lot of great ideas for the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Hey! I have actual free time today and tomorrow XD so whenever is great! I’d love to whatever you’ve got. 🙂
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To “hear” XD don’t know what was going through my head there 🤣
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@kyronthearcanin
Yeah!! Thanks ❤️
So, my idea was kind of that Ania (yeah I’m calling her that now xD) gets asked by her coworker to join them, and they’re the ones who are pulling off some sort of heist. I’m assuming right now that they’re trying to kill a government leader, but I could change it later, depending on how it goes 😉 She at first…[Read more]-
Okay this actually sounds really cool! 😁 I love brainstormin XD.
Offering money would be along the right lines for motivation, since she’s taking care of Luca. Depending on how closely she knows the coworker, there are a few different ways you could take this. If they’ve never talked, and he seems nice, she could not exactly trust him, but at…[Read more]-
@kyronthearcanin
Thanks!! 😁 I really appreciate you taking the time to write all that out too ❤️❤️
Yeah, so I was thinking she’ll probably know him, but not super well. So at first she’s like, of course not! But then, exactly! she needs money for her and her brother, and she agrees to help them.
Then I was kind of just thinking that either her…[Read more] -
Also, one of the other things I was unsure about is the length? I really wanted to finish an entire novel, and I was set on this idea, but I feel like if I don’t have an ending I’m excited for I’ll just… stop xD
So I was wondering if maybe I should just try to aim for a novella or short story type thing? You had a lot of great ideas for the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Alright! I hope you have a good time! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Awesome!! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
*wants to see the goats now*
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sneak preview of Tomorrow's War in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
*bows* Why thank you! XDXD
I loved this! ❤️❤️I agree with Whaley, I love the names. Also, the way you combined a futuristic world with something like the old Bible meetings when the Nazis were taking over in Germany (at least that’s the first thing that came to my mind)… It was just amazing! I would totally read this if…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Cool! Yeah, it was a weird moment of my brain arguing with itself over if those even fit at all 🤣🤣
Yw! I loved them so good work! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That would be great!!
Ania and Luca sound so great! Uhhh I like that but the only other names I can think of that would fit the name would be either Peter (for some reason, idk my mind went to that XD) and something like Ruben? Or Reuben if you wanna go Bible style XD. It’s so weird I’ve never used those names (as far as I know lol)…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
XD Well I hope that’s a good sign that my cliffhangers are working lolol
That’s so great!! I’m glad you had a breakthrough, they really do just feel like a huge relief! I can’t wait to read more of your writing (and same thing, no pressure 😉) And honestly… Healer was my first outlined book. And I didn’t even stick with the outline,…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
XDXD
Healer is going well, but I’ve been doing a lot more worldbuilding on writing. I’m planning on just writing like crazy and getting chapter 9 done at the end of the week lol, so we’ll see if that works. I had a huge breakthrough in motivation for some characters and everything made a whole lot more sense. So yeah, I’m planning on…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Awesome! Hey, I haven’t done many sprints in the past, but I mean, any progress at all is progress (add that to my book of tips XD). I got a little bit done but not a whole lot, and it was kind of split through a bunch of different projects.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
*me just now seeing this* *I don’t know how I missed it* XD
That’s so cool! Yeah, I used to use a bunch of different legos together… big lions and t-rex and sharks that I built attacking probably innocent people along with Kai from Ninjago randomly sitting inside this huge robot thing with fake wires everywhere… Yeah, legos are fun…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks so much!! And yeah definitely don’t feel rushed. I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! 😁❤️❤️
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
XDXD
Heheh… I’m not even sure I can XD but I’m doing my best. No joke I just bought seven notebooks to get all my ideas organized lol
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’ve been working on that too. Lol I’m working on too many projects so half of them are actually being written and the other half are in the brainstorming/world and character building process XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Lol I’ve been sprinting for about an hour now so I’m sort of joining. I may have to leave without saying tho because we’re on a different schedule and I’m kind of stretched thin XD
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Yeah, I was thinking more of either a novel/novella too! Yeah I get it, sorry if its a little confusing xD Basically, I’m just struggling to figure out the plot and I feel a little overwhelmed in all the ways it could go .. I guess I could just start and see where it takes me, but like I said I feel like I’ll be more likely to finish if I have an…[Read more]
So you already have the thematic idea for an ending… Basically her turning back to God and trusting again. The only thing you really need is the real story ending, and how to weave the theme in with that. Maybe there’s a plot twist. The governor paid the men to frame his death so that he could get out of some kind of bad situation. Or maybe Ania…[Read more]
Yep, exactly!! I just don’t really know how I want the story to go, and what would be the most interesting plot.
I’m not even sure I want to write about an assassination XD So I might change it to some sort of heist, or maybe she agrees to help the assassins and then changes her mind later 😂 I do like the characters a lot though, and the arcs.…[Read more]
Ikr? I have a hard time deciding between the multiple paths a story could take… especially with Healer. That’s why it’s taking so long to get a chapter finished 😅.
At the moment I’m trying to switch over to being a plotter instead of a pantser, so I know what I’m getting myself into. The characters, like in yours, are generally the same- Dune,…[Read more]
Yesss I can’t wait!! xD I’m about to do some kind of brainstorming session, but right now honestly I have no idea what I’m doing with plot … I really wanted to just start something by Thursday, but I don’t know if it’s going to work 😅 I’ll update you later if I decide on something though!!