Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12

@esther-c

Heheh I think I gave a rough cliffhanger there.  😅🤣

Any ideas for the next part of the story?

@freedomwriter76

Hmmmmm… Having a hard time deciding. Maybe Jacque, because he’s French? 😅🤣 Honestly I’m fine with any of them, they all sound cool.

@awsumfaith

No problem! (Trust me, geography is not usually my strong suit, but I decided to take the time to learn when I got into map-making. If you ever want to learn more about maps, WASD20 is a good youtuber who does fantasy maps. He does some DND stuff, but I just look at his mapping stuff in general. It was funny, actually, because when I…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

I love it!!! 😃

The only thing I would suggest is with your rivers at the bottom of the map, or maybe just one, Grange, if I’m reading that right. Usually (unless this is unique to your world) no river goes from one ocean to another. That would make two continents, or a continent and an island. So because of that it seems that you…[Read more]

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith @anyone

Not gonna lie I have no idea how those tags didn’t work last time. 😕

Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:

Tali pressed a rough cloth to her temple, where Brycen had hit her. The gash had mostly stopped bleeding by now, but it still stung. Atticus paced the tent, and…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, for Eclipse, he’s sort of an antihero, so… I don’t have as much of that problem. I do, however, have a villain that really gets on my nerves, and so I figured writing about him in a castle would end up kind of crazy. 😅🤣

@whalekeeper

Yeah my first character castle-ish thing is with a villain, so I’m figuring that out.

Idk how you guys are writing yourselves into it, too. I can’t write about myself very well, which is weird, cause I know what I would do for most things… idk. 😅

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks!!! 🙂

Heh, no… I used to call her Kyrah, and accidentally still spell it that way sometimes instead of what I call her now, Kirah. So anytime that happens is unintentional. 😅 I found just recently that in the Crescent patrol there was another girl, Kira, so I don’t know what I was thinking there…

Fun fact, Kirah’s…[Read more]

@everyone

I just had an awesome time reading through this whole thing… I got bored. 😅

@she-is-a-pirate

1. Swords be awesome! 🤣 Awesome name by the way. 🙂

(Ok, i’ll stop trying to be a pirate XD. It’s not working too well)

2. Oooh, Edmund is so cool! Awesome choice. I might have to go with… hmmm… maybe Janner or Arthram Wingfeather from WFS.

3. Yeah, I couldn’t think of one I would change either. I completely agree!!!

4. My…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oooooh, I love Griffin! I vote Griffin!!! 😃

@she-is-a-pirate

Ahoy there! I’m… late. 😅 How come I didn’t see this until now?

Anyway, I be Solfyre! (Or Ava, or KyrontheArcanin, ye can call me pretty much anythin’ 🙂) I enjoy writing (obviously XD), reading, guitar-playing, dragons, wolves, cats, and a whole lot of other stuff. I write mainly fantasy but have been trying some sci-fi…[Read more]

Wow, I couldn’t stop calling Sam a boy for some reason XD

I’ll go ahead and tag you, too: @loopylin

@esther-c

I don’t mind at all! Better for you to start it off than me. 🤣

If Azar had been in control, Eclipse was sure he’d be jumping up and down. Well, don’t just stand there! the spirit commanded. Say something! Honestly, you’re terrible. I should have picked Lumeo instead.

Humans, Eclipse thought with a sigh. Of all creatures...

The gi…[Read more]

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.

Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c

Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:

The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”

I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I like the wings! And the webbed hands are cool.

@thearcaneaxiom

Somewhat, I guess. At first I wasn’t sure who would be who, so it kind of just happened. But the main idea of the shifter thing is not like a shape-shifter, but of her ability to shift reality in someone’s mind. Her eyes change when she’s doing it, making them appear more dragon-like, at least in color.