Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@euodia-vision

It let me in, but I don’t think I can add anything.

@euodia-vision

Hmmm… Maybe something just for writing in general? And then songs for certain kinds of characters? Anything like that, and if we think of something else.

@euodia-vision

Yep, that’s me! 🙂

@sarafini

I agree with Freedom. Most times, in fiction, it’s spelled out. However, in something like a journal entry… I think it was that if it’s more than three syllables, you should spell it out, otherwise it’s fine. And if there’s a number with more syllables than that, and another in the same sentence has one or two, then spell both out. I…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

It’s Starlighter.

@euodia-vision

I do, in fact, have spotify… Idk what the difference is exactly, but I don’t have the premium thing or whatever. Cool idea! I love listening to music while I write/think up a story idea. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom @awsumfaith @starshiness

@godlyfantasy12

Cool! I’ve never tried DISC… I’ll have to check it out.

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks!

Yeah, I probably should have put that in somewhere. At dinner for the underground, they all eat together in the dining hall, and new people are announced. There are sometimes misunderstandings if people don’t remember that, but win the underground system they switch around roles a lot, getting to know everyone better…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oooooooooh I knew pretty much none of that and it’s SOOOO good. Ara is even better than I thought! And the vine scar is super cool. Can’t wait to see where this goes! 😃😉

@godlyfantasy12

Ooooooohh I love this!!! Ara is so great from the bits and pieces I’ve seen of her. Can’t wait to read more! 😃😃

@starshiness

Ooh, I love it! Very nice. I’ve never done a mood board either, so I don’t know how exactly you would do it “right.” Good job!

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith

Here’s the next section in the Dragonsbane Society:

Amara pulled back the string of her bow, peering at the target, a circle of thin wood they’d nailed to a tree. Keeping the arrow straight, she released it and watched as it buried itself in the ground. She sighed and dropped the bow. W…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I love this!!! 🙂

I agree with @felicity. The descriptions made it seem so real, without losing the style of writing. Well done! 😃

@thearcaneaxiom

Yep, definitely meant amorphous star! Totally didn’t just put two random words together… Idk how that happened honestly. I looked up and thought, wait, what is a morphed star? And then forgot what I was thinking when I put it, so… Yeah, we’ll go with amorphous! 😅🤣

@thearcaneaxiom

Oooooh, cool! I love it! It’s like ocean waves, or morphed stars…

*me reading through this and realizing ‘morphed stars’ makes no sense* 😅🤣

@landric

Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.

Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Happy Easter!!! 😃🎉

The anniversary of His victory!

@landric

Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃

I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.

Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.