KydonAndWillow

@rae

I like it how it is, tbh. I think it sounds great!

I’m dreaming of a time, when I was broken,

When you comforted me, many a time.

This part though doesn’t flow as smoothly as the rest of it. Um… I wish I could offer a suggestion… Maybe it could go something like this…?

I’m dreaming of a time, when I am hurting,

And you comfort my aching h…

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@trailblazer

Ooo!! Cool idea!

I don’t have any plot ideas and such right now, but I’ll let you know if I think of any!

Aannddd… even though I write mostly male characters, I don’t really have any advice. 😅 I agree with what Esther said, though.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh my goodness so I just watched one of her videos on why she chose to indie publish her book, and she claimed she wasn’t bashing traditional publishing but… you can tell she’ll never traditionally publish any of her books. 🫤😂 And she was saying that some people will give their manuscript to a publishing company, get rejec…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Oooh, I like the idea!!

That said, if anyone has any interesting plot ideas or conflict suggestions, let me know! Or if there are any good book recommendations from that time period, I’d love to hear them.

I will say writing a book over the span of eight years could be a challenge, but I’m sure you could do it. 😉 A series isn…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

“I had people I hung out with, but they weren’t really my friends. I could never really be close with them, because we had to hide our secret from the government,” her eyes wandered for a moment to Lukas and Callie dancing across the room. She tore her eyes from Lukas and back to Fynn. “So I know how you feel.”

@trailblazer

Oh wow!!! This is a really cool idea!!

I’m not really sure how you want your story to go…but I would really recommend developing your characters before any plotting! Figure out their character arcs and internal conflicts. (Abbie Emmons on YouTube really helped me learn why internal conflicts matter! But if you do watch her…[Read more]

@jonas

Wow. You (and your sister) are amazing at building worlds! I feel like mine is so cliche! I really can’t help you much on worldbuilding, because I’m really new to that and it would be like trying to teach a professional artist how to draw, XD

But I will gladly try to help you with characters!!!

@grcr gave some great pointers on character…[Read more]

@jonas

Oop, guess I didn’t see that.

@jonas

I’ll comment more later, but for crystal color, maybe one could be a whitish/clear or maybe silvery colored? Or sort of iridescent?

@jonas

yw! 😁

(Oh, I see. yeah, warm purples aren’t my favorite either.)

@jonas

Ooo… this sounds really interesting. I’m excited to hear more!

For the colors… maybe use a third shade of purple, or grass/parakeet/pear green (I don’t really know what it is exactly, so here’s the hex: #87e36b)? I know those are a bit similar to the ones you already have… but that’s all I can think of at the moment. Were you…[Read more]

@jonas

I don’t find that particularly difficult.

@jonas @rae

I find myself actually pretty good at getting just the basic melody notes from just hearing a tune (I do need a piano to do it, though). I can help with that, if you need.

@princescachronicle22

I think Wyoh ate your RP… 🤔

@rae

It is really good!! and sad…

I’m not sure that I can really help… so sorry…

@rae

It’s soooo good!!!

@acancello

I SAW THAT ONE!! It’s so funny!!

@acancello
Oh dear XD XD

@acancello

LOL 😂

It’s so true thooo