KydonAndWillow

@jonas

Me like. Me like lots.

@anyone

I would like to revive this forum. Something that I have wondered about for a while now has to do with the necessity of the holly ghost in the trinity. I myself am non-trinitarian, but I was curious on what any of y’alls thoughts were on it if you have any.

@jonas

Sorry, I haven’t been on for a while, allow me to quickly express my thoughts here and there form when I’ve last been here.

I would be open to extended elements, but I worry that it would be more cliche than just the four Greek elements. I at one point had a draft for a lightning element, but I couldn’t think of anything interesting to d…

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@trailblazer

I love it! Charley annoys me, lol (I’m guessing that’s the point!)

@trailblazer

I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.

I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]

@trailblazer @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Ottoline

She sighed with relief as Lane looked away from her scars and turned his attention to the girl in the doorway. But she knew it was only a matter of time before they would get brought up.

“Oh, no, it’s not my statue, or my house even…” the bewildered girl…[Read more]

UGH! I did not mean “accessing”. I meant “assessing”

@fernweh_grace

Hmm, so my worldbuilding is pretty solid, and very real for me, because I literally have places based off of real things. For example, I have an underground trade city in the Nevari Desert that is directly based off of Derinkuyu, Cappadocia. I have a whole tribe that has ties to the Basotho, geographically, and culturally, and I…

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Ugh… It takes me forever to type mine.

@trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Great! 😆

Lane

Lane looked at Ottoline, accessing what kind of person she was. His eyes fell on her scars, and it reminded him of one of his friends back where he lived. His face vividly displayed a desire to ask about the scars, but he changed his…[Read more]

@grcr I love it!!!

Ottoline

“Do not worry,” Amir turned his warm eyes to the trembling boy. “She only shoots deer. Lucky for you.” Lane nodded.

“It’s not my statue,” Ottoline scoffed, rolling her eyes. “I couldn’t care less if you broke it or not.” Lane sighed with relief, brushing the hair out of his eyes.

“Just do not scare her, or she might…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Got it, lol!

Lane

He listened silently as the two people exchanged a few words.

I should probably find out where I am…

Lane shivered before he stepped inside the building. He slowly walked to a small statue in the corner of the room. He reached…[Read more]

@grcr

yep! lol

@savannah_grace2009

(I take it Lane has crashed the statue?)

@grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Ottoline

She stepped inside the building, and stopped dead in her tracks.

“What is this place?” she asked in awe. Brightly colored streamers fluttered from the ceiling, multicolored lights lit up the room, and the stone floor shone. A strange kind of music filled the room. She…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

@loopylin

NOOOOOooooo not again 😓

Btw, your signature is hilarious 😂 I love it.