KydonAndWillow

@autumnlily

This is an interesting start! The world is really interesting, and I like how you introduced the idea that everything is frozen over in the very first paragraph.

This is kind of nitpicky, but it’s what stood out to me the most: dialogue tags. I skimmed back over it, and I can’t find the word ‘said’ anywhere. Like I said, really…[Read more]

@acancello

To: Hugo Walton 40 Wildwood road. Windy Pines

From: Ottoline 887264 Lir, Andromeda

A Pythonos is a race, similar to humans. They have dark magick and powerful spells and they run the UNIT (the place I’m in). Basically they’re evil incarnate. You don’t want to meet one, trust me.

What’s juvie?

I don’t really know what Math or any of…[Read more]

@acancello

8???????? A cold CA winter is 30 to 40 XD

WOW THAT IS SUPER HOT!!!!!!! I am jealous!

@esther-c

Livia

Oh my gosh. How did he know??? She recalled herself thinking the exact thing about Lukas’ smile…breathtaking. 

This was getting creepy. What was he, a mind reader or something?

“What do you want me to say?” Liv felt her cheeks grow even hotter. “I am so confused…what is this conversation?!?”

@acancello

I’m so happy because today it’s 8 degrees! Me and my dad were joking that it was “blazing hot” outside, because it is…compared to what it has been! I walked outside and I was like “my eyes aren’t freezing! I can feel my face! It’s so warm outside!!!” lol

@acancello

It does kind of sound like Hugo! lol

To: Hugo Walton 40 Wildwood road. Windy Pines

From: Ottoline 887264 Lir, Andromeda

Hi Hugo!

When the Pythonos gave me the letter, I was so excited to write back!

I’m fourteen. I don’t know if I have any siblings because I live in a horrible place where I get tortured almost every day by wacko…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh I was asking Flaz 😅

oops! I confused myself lol…😅😂 sorry about that…

Oh I love that so much 🤣 He has so much character within just a few sentences. XDD

😅 lol 😊 yeah…

@savannah_grace2009

This is hilarious!!!

Fynn

He bit down on his lip, but a smile still crept onto his face. Poor Liv, he was just getting started. “Now some girls notice his smile more. He calls it lopsided, but I’ve heard a few say its breathtaking. He still doesn’t believe me.” He sighed and clicked his tongue. Lukas was going to hate hi…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh I was asking Flaz 😅

Oh I love that so much 🤣 He has so much character within just a few sentences. XDD

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t know what else to ask him atm, so we’ll just leave it at that. XD

Just ignore whoever wasn’t supposed to answer… lol 😅

@esther-c

(Ok wait, the question is to Flaz or Fir? Fir is a she… so…. I’ll just answer for both… 😄)

Fir: I feel bad saying this… I’m not trying to be mean… I’m going to say it… my least favorite quadruplet is Flaz. He’s annoying… sure, he doesn’t try to be annoying, but he is. Oh, and he thinks he can boss us all around because he was born [Read more]

@esther-c

Marcurious: Ottoline’s like a little sister to me…but she’s pretty cool for a mortal. I’m not sure if she admires my amazingness…I’d have to ask her.

@esther-c

OH MY GOSH I’M DYING!!!

Liv

She choked on air and burst into a coughing fit. She hoped it would distract Fynn from the way her cheeks were blushing.

“Wow. I did not see that coming,” she made a face, purposefully avoiding Fynn’s question. In truth, she had noticed Lukas’s eyes…but Fynn didn’t need to know that.

@grcr

That’s awesome! 😂

I’ll ask him a question…

If you had to choose, who would you say is your least favorite quadruplet?

@savannah_grace2009

*sigh* Oh yes, the burdens of amazingness. Now I have to ask… Is there someone special who admires you and your amazingness more than anyone else?

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh, lovely idea, lol.

Fynn

Fynn looked over at Lukas again. “I can see why you like him though… I think his eyes are the real girl-catcher though. Have you noticed at all?”

Lukas’s eyes have central heterochromia. so there’s a ring of brown around his pupil and the rest of his iris is blue. Where the rings meet look…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks!! 😅 lol yeah… they are a crazy set of siblings…

@esther-c

Marcurious: I suppose so…nobody understands the trials of being so amazing and perfect in every way. It can be exhausting.

@grcr

Flaz is a quadruplet?! I love that!

@savannah_grace2009

(Oh my word, he’s great. 😂)

Yes, of course. Does this amazingness make it hard to converse with or understand those less amazing?

(I’m only fueling his ego, this is not good! 🤣)

Ok, I am going to enter a character you all haven’t met yet… (I think).

I’m adding Fir Sayre, a thrill-seeking teen. She’s one of Flaz’s quadruplet siblings…