@koshka
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months ago
I KNOW! When I was reading that I was like, “No way! This is what happened to –––” Except I don’t think Drew Carter’s dad died in Dessert Storm. And was he Special Forces?
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Esther replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months ago
Your advice is so so helpful!!
And it drew attention to a weaker part of my book—my FMC identifying the lie she’s been believing and accepting the truth. That turn-around moment is a part I’m still working on, so you pointing that out is awesome. I think right now she’s just been living this lie without experiencing any consequ…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months ago
Hey guyssss! (I tried to post this two days ago but didn’t copy what I wrote, so I gave up after it didn’t post 😭😂 So we shall try again!)
In the third draft of my novel, my FMC’s arc includes her making some bad decisions and going down a path she regrets. But in the midst of the aftermath of those decisions, she is actually kind of enjoy…[Read more]
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-GRCR- started the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Hello hello hello.
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I’m rewriting TPE (I’ve renamed it to A Fire Within btw, so I’ll probably call it AFW instead) for the billionth time and I’m pretty happy with it so far, so I’m going to start sharing it again. Andddd… yeah. Tagging everyone I can think of atm, but feel free to ignore. I don’t want to bother anyone. 😅😅
Did you know that today instead of the 25th was originally the day that children got presents? (Personally, I like waiting almost a month for them instead of getting them right away.)
Same.
Sure! That sounds fun!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
We have one that’s more like a jelly salad, and one that’s a barbeque sauce. We usually eat the second one on meatballs for Christmas, but sometimes, (like this year), we have it for Thanksgiving as well.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
That sounds fun! We could also share and recommend poets/poems with each other maybe.
That’s definitely something I think I need to work on in my writing.
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks <3
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
That is perhaps the most iconic side character focused entry I have seen in a roleplay. That was needed. I appreciate your thoughtful addition.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes, I do every year, except this year because my Mom made canned cranberry sauce…hence why I didn’t eat it because it wasn’t the recipe I like.
I don’t eat it on anything, just straight cranberry sauce.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@koshka Yeah, that’s true.
I take the revived headcanon too because I like that ending a lot better, but I could see why one might not share that view.
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 5 months ago
@koshka lol that’s a great one. I feel like that would fit a dnd group really well XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 months ago
Thank you!!
😁😁
Thank youuu!!
It looks like different colors are for different character traits?
I guess you could say that… each color represented the personality vibe they gave me.
Your time lapse is cool! Your drawing method is so confident, it’s rather satisfying to watch. Is it of a specific event in your sto…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 5 months ago
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whaley posted an update 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka Hey! I have a question you’ve probably been asked before, if you don’t mind answering. Is there anything I should be aware of when I write twin characters?
My main characters are twin brothers. I’ve treated them like normal brothers so far, besides the fact that they don’t have an age-based sibling dynamic. My default…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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It’s a great question! First off, just like any relationship, no twin sets are the same. However, there are some things to keep in mind… hopefully I don’t ramble too much. Twins are fabulous in literature when done right!
1. Don’t underestimate the age dynamics of twins. The older twin is Baby A/The Older One. It really shapes how we each see…[Read more]
So, yeah. Basically like normal brothers, just with quirks.
Oooooo, twinsies. I loveth twinsies (definitely no bias of course *cough cough*).
First of all, sounds like you’re doing a great job so far.
Now, I would say there is still a type of age dynamic…but not exactly like normal siblings. I am 3 min older than my dear doppelganger, which of course makes jokes like “I’m older and wiser” so very……[Read more]
Thinking about this, and came up with a few things that we do without thinking (brainwave stuff I guess). I don’t know how this would change between Boy-boy twins, but it’s a thing.
1) We finish each other’s sentences. A lot. Even when talking to each other. Which sometimes makes it awkward having to talk to someone without the other, because I…[Read more]
Thank you both for the answers!! I’m still thinking about what you both said, so I will delay my response for a little longer. I appreciate all the details. :]
I think I might have some more questions formulating, based on what you’ve said
Just shoot them at us whenever they’re ready. =)