Koshka

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

wait wait wait.

Hang on.

Onnendel is blind? He’s the elf, right? How did that happen?

Did I miss a chapter where he went blind?

Otherwise, man, my hands were sweating, I don’t mind telling you. It was a lovely chapter and I can’t WAIT for the next part!

@koshka @ellette-giselle and maybe? @raxforge

I’m confused, are we still in the basement or is something happening?

@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h

And here’s Monday’s installment!

In Which Dwogin Will Not Be Outdone, and Aenwest Meets The Abyss (Nearly)

Chapter 4

It was amazing what three days of hard travel could do to a landscape . Gone were the deep woods full of mushrooms and squirrels. We had passed up into broken foothills where the…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka ohh this is so awesome! I’m loving it so far.

Most of my characters are a too little unhinged for me to trust them showing up at my house lol

but maybe I’d manage to stop them from blowing something up before all was said and done

If only by threatening them with “I’m the author, I can erase you from existence as…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

thanks for filling me in. 🙂

Np

Ben

“Of course, always will appreciate any help. My friend Rax is a pyromancer, meaning he has the power of fire. Sometimes his pyromantic side kicks in and his loving side is almost non-existent, which I pray has not happened. Oh, right I have a tracker!” Ben takes the large backpack, which is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @whalekeeper @koshka

Rax

Stops firing, many of the inflammable (inflammable really means flammable, look at part 4 the Element of Style by William Strunk Jr. and EB White) objects in the room are set afire. He looks around and sees what he has done, the smile that was on his face disappeared. Looking down on the ground in…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

If you are really interested in understanding the fight, go to page 416 and read about anything that has to do with Rory, Leo, or Agents. If not, then Rax did an okay of explaining. There are plenty of other characters who refuse to get involved in the fight at this point.

@rae

Poor Alpha. When Rory finds out about this,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @whalekeeper

Alpha

Alpha sat down, leaning his back against the wall. His breath came quick and short. “Eh, not too bad. I’m not in as much pain as you’re probably thinking I am. And the injury itself isn’t the worst I’ve had. It’s deep, sure, but the worst injury is a possible punctured lung.” Alpha gathered…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Marcel

“So… They went for me, because they want him, because they want his brother, because they want you. What’s your name?”

“Rory.”

Marcel thought on this for a second. He took Rory’s hand and swung it up and down, an exhausted shake. “Nice to meet you.”

@koshka

*dissolves into a jumble of joy bubbles*

It’s the little Natan boy! Awwwww.

Another great example on how to make a character sympathetic, despite being “cold as the alps.” XD

Also one of the worst heartbreaks I’ve had over a character. Thank you for reminding me.

*sniff*

@whalekeeper  @koshka

Rory

Rory glanced over at Leo. He could see Marcel was in pain and it was taring him up inside. “Marcel, this wasn’t about Quincy.” He paused, wondering how much to say with the little boy in the room. Finally, he took a deep breath. “They kidnapped Quincy to get at Leo because he’s hiding me from them and they know it.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Yep

Marcel

“Sure I do.”

“What happened?”

“A bunch of guys started stalking the kid. Didn’t like that.” Marcel paused to hiss through his teeth, and lightly relaxed his wings. “I would have stuck with normal street fighting, but they kept coming so I had to improvise.”

@whalekeeper  @koshka

Not a lot I can do without Koshka as she makes up half the room.

Rory

Rory quickly pushed Marcel back down. “Stay put and don’t move. You got hit by something. I think it was Quincy’s shield.”

He glanced over at Leo for confirmation, but Leo was rummaging about in his fist aid kit for something.

Rory turned back to…[Read more]

@koshka @ellette-giselle

I did not intend for my character to get this hurt. 😂 I anticipate he will be very chill about the whole thing and probably skip hospital. Even if that’s a poor decision.

Marcel

Voices rose and moved. Marcel opened his eyes; the fuzzy light of an electric bulb hung over the couch he lay on. He didn’t have the best…[Read more]

@koshka @whalekeeper

Rory

Rory looked from Marcel to Leo, trying to read the young man’s face. Is he going to make it? Rory wanted to scream the question, but he remained silent. I can’t watch someone else innocent die because of something I did… or didn’t do.

“Is he okay?” Quincy whispered, wispy eyebrows trembling.

Rory swallowed hard and…[Read more]

@koshka

Don’t we all.

Except, actually not me.

At the moment………..

@koshka

EXCUSES!!! Can’t roll my eyes hard enough!

lol.

@whalekeeper

Okay, well so am I.

@koshka where are you!? We need you!!!

@koshka @whalekeeper

What happened?

We’re in the elevator but it’s far from over.

*sigh* please don’t make me commit arson with my Agents just to bring you guys back.

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