@koshka
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Paxton
Paxton glanced at Wolfgang’s two brothers, keeping his head a bit low. He shrunk slightly as Jakob’s eyes met his. He looked a bit…uneasy about something.
Upset…
Paxton turned his gaze to Reuben instead, studying the boy’s clothes rather then his face.
He tilted his head, noticing the splotches of color tha…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter @keilah-h @wilder-w
Oh! I was just thinking about what my charries would do at lunch! Y’all are awesome.
By the way, I feel kinda like I need to put on a content warning. Nothing is really stated, but some pretty nasty things are aludes to, including addiction, abuse, profanity, and immorality.…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity
Thanks!
Oooo, I want more of these characters, even if I’m not exactly a romance reader.
My book’s plot is not the romance exactly! Just a subplot.
I’m curious how you make Christopher and Briana finally forgive each other.
Hehe, I don’t quite know myself 🙂 Still working on that.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oh boy…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Arabella
Wolf…Fox…
“Grimm and Nyx! You’ve seen them!” Luna cried, eyes sparkling. “Oh, then they are here!” A small smile lit her lips, her mind obviously not grasping the man’s sadistic grin…
The words he’d been implying before…
He’d met them…along with some others.
A blonde boy…<…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Let’s see…
Viktor
As soon as the man walked up, Viktor heard Reúven’s voice in a low mutter.
“What fine boots. Very much the officer.”
Viktor’s eyes went wide. He spread his feet and gripped his sword, ready. Esen shifted on his shoulders to raise her crest in answer to his…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@koshka oooh…who is almarrin following?
Luna
“Yea?! Me neither! Well, not mine own age anyway. I’ve been around plenty of adults. I live in a small commune outside of the city. We grow our own food and such. We are not a cult though….my parents made sure to let me know to make that clear…not sure what a “cult” is,” she tilted her head, “But so…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon anyone here?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@koshka heya! @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
Grimm stared at the bottle of green liquid, considering the option for a moment.
He glanced at the little creature in his arms as he twitched. He ran a forefinger over the kit’s brow, letting out a small sigh.
“Let’s try it.” He said softly.
Zlatan nodded, opening the bottle. “Like I said, onl…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Luna
“I am utterly confused!” She announced cheerily, all smiles.
Nyx’s face seem to mirror her confusion. He rubbed his temples before returning to his preferred napping position.
Inglor laughed. “Ah, nevermind.”
“I suppose you’re a different elf then I then! Or…Alve? Is that what you call yourself? We call them Elves…perhaps t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h can we get started back here again?? K rlly wanna continue it!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@koshka OH MY WORD THAT WAS HILARIOUS XD!!
Nyx
“Nyx!” Luna placed her head in her hands, blowing a puff of air.
“What?! That’s pretty crazy, even for me. Besides, I don’t even want to be here now, much less when I’m stinking fifty!”
The teacher straightened, face turning red from all of the excitement. She cleared her throat, “That’s…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
So I’ve been stalking this page…you have to agree it’s super fun to read!
Nyx turned around, eyes wide with horror. “And you’re still in highschool?!”
Hilarious! I love it! 😀
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Luna
Though she didn’t understand it entirely, the language the young man…obviously an elf like she, spoke tickled her ears, making her senses tingle. Her brain picked at the sounds, trying to decipher the language, but she couldn’t quite pick it all out.
She laughed sweetly at the exchange between Inglor and Almarrin, and then looke…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ok!
Reúven & others
Well, here they were. Literature right off the top. Reúven pulled a chair out for Liora and he and Viktor sat down on either side.
The teacher had stepped out to talk with another teacher in the hall, letting the students settle in before class started. She wa…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity @madelyn @theloonyone @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper
Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.
“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ahh Erich, I luv u lol!! But don’t go getting into trouble!! Tho…I feel like that’s where we’re heading!!
@elishavet-pidyon u on and want to RP with Reúven and them meeting Lyn and Grimm?
I’m finally on for a while!
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@koshka agh I love him!
Luna
Sister?
Luna’s smile grew. She giggled at the words. She didn’t have any siblings, though she’d always wanted one. Many of the adults and elders of her commune tended to call her Little Sister, or youngling. Little one. Little elf. A variety of sweet nicknames they’d given her over the years…
But, it was curious h…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that would be an interesting scene! And ugh!! Alwin has my heaaart!! @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wolder-w @keilah-h
Paxton
“Are…Are you ok?”Ok? He was far from ok…
But, he slowly nodded, figuring the young man was asking more about wether he’d been hurt in their sudden collide and less about Paxton’s current mental and emotiona…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.
This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]
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