@koshka
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 19 hours ago
Thank you for the critique! You gave me some very helpful feedback.
Just a couple things to address so you don’t have to keep wondering
The second and third sentences seem to imply that Max’s only non-human feature is that his eyes are full of emotion. That doesn’t seem like a necessarily inhuman trait. Do I understand cor…
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 19 hours ago
RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!! I COULD GO ON FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
Wow, thanks.
I wasn’t expecting that enthuastic of a response.
Hopefully notifications work for you…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
Well, I obviously took those with artificial light. XD At least they finally came through. Any thoughts? 😁
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keliah-h @hybridlore @theducktator
Ok everyone! Last night I tried to share the character concept art, but apparently it didn’t go through. I’m going to try sharing them again now.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 21 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Third story! This should fill in a few gaps from the second
A Visitor in the Night
“’Suuuuuuch is…the faaaaaaate of the eh-vil–”“Not /eh/. Look, there’s a vowel after the /v/, so it’s…C’mon, you’re almost done,” A mother coaxed her young son.
“/Ee/! Ee-vil-do-er.’ Evil-doer, right?” Simeon…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 21 hours ago
oh wow.
yeah no I know not everyone should be getting death threats who leads. Our pastors aren’t currently being hunted or threaten, but it was just the general idea that so many churches and pastors and believers don’t take their faith seriously
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 21 hours ago
Y’all. This is sad.
I’ve put aside most of my fun reading during January to focus on things. And I just realized. One of my family checked out The Screwtape Letters in my favorite audio book version. (And it’s due in 16 minutes.)
*Marianne level sobbing*
Just kidding. XD
I’ll laugh when I write, and sometimes I’ll tear up. Usually it’s not…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 21 hours ago
I think it’s happening later today.
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 3 days, 22 hours ago
This world is breaking for love.
Each hoping, searching, everywhere,
For the perfect kiss, the touch,
That will not end, or betray,
Or be lost, bend,
or fade.
Only to see is shatter away,
A thousand sparkles on the wind.
Blood and bone does not ascend
To heaven on its own. -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 23 hours ago
*SCREECHES IN ANNOYANCE!!!* THE SILLY THING NEVER NOTIFIED ME! I FOUND THIS BY MISTAKE!!!
*takes a very deep breath*
RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!! I CO…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days ago
lol. Right?
My brother pulled this one when we went to the store…….
It was funny. He did it so perfectly that they actually just left him alone.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days ago
I try to be coldhearted when I write, but my hands shake when I bring a perfect couple together, and I’ve cried sometimes while trying to kill off characters and then I have to stop because I can’t see. However, it’s mostly after I’ve finished and am reading through the draft that things really hit me.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days ago
Sorry… I just wanted to use that meme template really badly!
It’s totally fine. I’m glad to see everyone enjoying themselves making memes about me lol
Also, I found the typo funny
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days ago
Yup! I can try to get you on really last minute!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days ago
during COVID, our church received a lot of attention when our church took a stand and our pastor was thrown in prison.
Honestly, my first response was, “Wow! That is so awesome!!”
I know, I’m nuts.But you’ve seen what I write and I honestly admire stories like that so, so much! So I don’t feel glad that he was put in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 1 hour ago
Thanks!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 1 hour ago
YAY!!!!!!!!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 12 hours ago
For me its more like let my parents read my WIP or draw 25. I’m just scared that they won’t like what I write.
And seriously!!!! Whaley, Ellette, my Andrew, @stephie and now you too!!!!!!?
When the scanner is running again, I have a couple drawings in Baron’s art style that I drew tonight (only…[Read more]
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