Koshka

@whalekeeper

*bows dramatically*

sadly I am the only one in my family who likes anime! I guess when I move up to Idaho to go to college next year (Lord willing) I’ll barrow a bunch from the library. 😛

@ellette-giselle

Give yourself a foundation to build off of, otherwise you’re just building castles in the sky, and only Miyazaki can do that. 😉

Hehehe, I see what you did there

@highscribeofaetherium

yay!!

@ellette-giselle

If you’re worried about that, you’ll be 100% fine.

@highscribeofaetheriuM

no prob.

@rae

I will be more annoyed if you save people who need to die for character arc or story purposes.

@ellette-giselle

and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆

Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!

lol, yes

I’m glad you enjoyed it!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don’t get too attached or you may hate me for ete…

@theshadow

Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and grammarly, and I just write and write and don’t look back until the whole thing is on paper. Beginning to end. Then you can go back and start editing and fine-lining and rewriting. Give yourself a foundation to build off of, o…[Read more]

@rae

and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆

 

Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!

@loopylin

Alpha

Alpha chuckled. “Honestly, not much else. I’ve been bored out of my mind, hence playing with the knife.” Alpha’s hand glowed and he made the knife travel around the room before hovering over his shoulder again. “From getting stabbed in the lung to not having anything to do, life is crazy,” Alpha commented with a sigh, making his…[Read more]

@theducktator

thank you for the prayers!

@raxforge (you haven’t read this one yet) @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore

So, I haven’t finished this one yet, but it’s getting long so I’m gonna post it in two parts.

Also, I posted a section of this story above, and I will be making that section bold so that those who already read it can skip with ease.

With that, i…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I just realized that the reply I wrote for you didn’t post. Sorry.

He caught pneumonia, at least, that’s what I wrote his symptoms to fit, I never officially name it in the story.

@linus-smallprint

 

yeah…. If I wanna risk seeing porn worthy covers when I open it. I found a few round about ways, and I did to Alcatraz that rout (until those were taken down for being politically offensive) but I honestly don’t have time to listen to audio books and I can read a book in a couple hours. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@keilah-h

thanks!! I might take you up on it.

@linus-smallprint

sounds good.
After all “Stories Are Soulfood” and I’d rather feed my mind and soul with good things rather than a poison laced supper. 😆

@linus-smallprint

wow!! This is so helpful!!
yeah, as I said before I’m not even gonna touch the series with Lesbian characters. So I’ll skip that set. I’m intrigued by the first Mistborn set. Not so sure about the others, I don’t really like sci-fi anyhow. (Though someone told me a few of my books I’ve written are calcified as sci-fi! 🤯…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I know!!

yeah, it sure does.

@keilah-h

aw thanks! 🥰😅

 

he was abandoned and grew up on the streets or in and out of orphanages and foster care.

his story is really sad and really wild. He should not be the man that he is today. Only God can do that.

@linus-smallprint

okay, that makes sense. I may opt out of that one. Do you think it’s worth it despite objections, or does the bad override any good you might get out of it in your opinion?

also, did you see my question on the other review?

thanks again!