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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
But it’s so sad when the favotite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!
If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters. You never know if you’re hero has what it takes until you throw him in the thick of it. I have high hopes for both, and I want to see them live up to…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Why am I not surprised loll
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Whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I TOLD YOU I MET HER IN REAL LIFE!!!!!
Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)
It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Days passed, and slowly, Leon regained some of the strength he had lost. On the second week, he was told he could work if he wanted to, and he did so with a will. It was wonderful to be with Rolf again, and the work was not draining a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m glad it worked!!
Yes, poor Conrad.
🤨 That’s odd….. I feel like I said he DIDN’T cry. I can remember several times he would have, but he couldn’t. And there was the one time at the end where he cried, but I alluded to the fact that it would have been more sound than tears.
Maybe I’m missing something………..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey guess what?!?
I just ran into your character Hallie the other day!!! NO LIE! She looked EXACTLY like the face claim, she had the same personality from what I’ve read of your book!!!!
It was driving me crazy! She and her fiance were visiting our church and I grantee you I kept sneaking glances at her. She had on a black…[Read more]
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Whaley started the topic What are some interesting things you've learned through story research? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 8 months ago
What are some interesting things you’ve learned through story research?
I feel like there’s always something interesting in a writer’s search history. Very often, this includes creative character deaths, so if you’d like to share… XD Well, I’ll go first.First off. I’ve been researching the origins of the electric guitar (because I have a…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I just got the cabbage stuck on the stove so we can eat in a few minutes.
*Snorts* XD
I’ll hang around here for a bit, mainly to think up a new TotW (Topic of the Week). I have a few other things to work on, like researching synth music, the earth’s atmosphere, etc. all for my projects. I’m waaay to concerned with…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I gotta work out exactly how Erich got into the US Army tbh😂🫣 I’m thinking it could’ve been a part of the offer for giving him a shorter sentence or something, but I gotta put more research into it
Or he just joined the Army after he had his sentence.
idk exactly yet. 😅 if I have to change things a bit I…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’m on nowwwww 🤭
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I love your signature 🤣🤣🤣
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Andrew replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 8 months ago
@ducktator
Can I use the lyrics of your song and put to some music?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Awesome!! I’m so glad you liked it!!!
Yeah….. Rolf had a rough time of it, but he got out sooner, whereas Leon was in the bad situation longer… things just didn’t escalate so high.
btw, was it you who asked about him changing his name? Well, if it was, you now have an answer!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oooo!! I like this!! This is getting good!
And, what if, what if we don’t make it?
This is a little cluncky because of the punctuation. If you did: “And what if–– what if we don’t make it?” or “And what if. . . what if we don’t make it?” either of those would work well. Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrif…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 8 months ago
It would be nice to have a closed community…
I really hope everything irons out here, but I would probably be open to joining another “Rivendale” made of marooned KeePers if this kingdom does crumble away.
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