Koshka

@ellette-giselle

Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊

Yes! I was reminded of Shasta as well!

But why do you like him over Rolf’s other friends??! (I mean, I like him best, but I know his entire story. You just saw a tiny bit of i…

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@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
         October 7th
         The Empire

As you will see by yesterday’s entries, I have returned to the Empire. It took all of yesterday to chronicle everything that happened to Ro…

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@liberty

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊

Hmm…the part w…

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@hybridlore

Yes!!! They’re back!

Glad you liked it!

Lol 🤣

I try.

This did seem a little out of place. I’m not sure if there’s something else he could say—I think he was sort of teasing, but still, it stuck out to me.

Okay yeah, makes sense. The odd thing about editing is I can’t get back into the character’s heads in the same way, so somet…[Read more]

I can’t do discord 🙁

Idk about Slack, I’ll have to ask my mom.

We already have Groupme for crew, so I can do that, I just don’t know how well it’d work for us.

@loopylin

Chase

“A l-little.” Chase watched her for a moment, before sitting down near her. “I l-like green.”

@whalekeeper

Retro/historical anything is pretty splendid. XD

My most recent book research went like this:

Bionic lungs

Underwater smoke bombs

Infrared contact lenses

Memory blocking drugs

I obviously was reviewing a spy school idea. Before that it was a stereotypes about Londoners and Scottish slang phrases. Although, I think the most…[Read more]

I would not probably join another form of social media. It’s one thing if it’s a closed forum, which would be fantastic, and which I wouldn’t mind paying a small fee to help support. (Small, as in up to $50 a year.) I don’t know much about other media, except that I don’t love it.

@whalekeeper

I also don’t want to leave unless we’re banished. If you think contacting Sir. DeGraaf will help, then I would say, try it. Even if it’s just for advice on facing down bugs. Do you know if he knows the current KP moderators?

@whalekeeper

Yes, ma’am!

*sends forth an army of glasswing butterflies to bug you about the RP*

@ellette-giselle

Another thing:

Why is it that bad guys always seem to ride black horses?

“Because, God has called me to bring the message of salvation to my people,” Rolf replied.

Hmmm…I thought you were going to take the story to where God had called those two to stay there and evangelize that area…but I guess not.

Leon smirked, havi…

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I just sent another message through the Contact Us page. I checked around for an email and found ‘kingdompenmag@gmail.com.’ I’m not sure if this is the only inbox KP uses, so I’m going to wait for a while before directly using this email instead of Contact Us.

I think the best thing to do right now is to have a backup plan, and try to get…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Hmm…the part when they got tied in the dessert gave me flashbacks of Leiand.

And…*crying* You killed another one of my favorite characters! Why…[Read more]

@keilah-h

What exactly does that entail?

Snipercore, reptiles, sci-fi, things like that. Also, I’ve never tried to use a 3D animation engine, but now that you’ve started playing with that, I associate you with the vibe of minimal-effect 3D models. I know that’s very specific and doesn’t make a lot of sense, but it’s in my brain now. Lol.

There’s n…

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I want somebody to digitally smack/spam me if I haven’t updated Marcel or Barnes within 24 hours.

*Extremely embarrassed at the length of the post* Also Sara, just because I yapped a lot does not mean you have to ‘fix’ anything. I’ve explained how I would edit, but those are my opinions and this is your project. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

no I haven’t!!!

Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.

I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I don’t like being super graphic/body horror about it, I just make sure my favorite characters come out of it with a tangible reminder of the incident.

Tangible reminder is a fun trope. I haven’t used it too often. I can’t remember the last time I gave a character a dramatic scar. It feels like something that belongs in the Keilah genre. :p

To be faaiir I do not even know who Alec and Everette are. Yet. I’m getting there. 🤣

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!

If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.

But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]